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reply posted on 18-4-2008 @ 12:47 AM by ElectricUncleSam
I decide to check the thermometer to see if the heat vented away during the night... Oh thank God, it's only 76 degrees... It's half normal again... Hopefully the problems of yesterday will not be upon us today... I notice the Sun is starting to rise, a little earlier than yesterday actually... hmmm... I peal back some of the foil and can barely stand the glare coming over the horizon... I quickly retreat and begin pacing... I have the strong urge to run, to flee, to find a place which is more secure... But where, there is nowhere, now you see my dilemma? All I have is the news, i called work earlier and everyone has the day off due to this strange phenomena... All of a sudden a huge pressure wave blasts through walls and through me, felt like someone punched me in the stomach.. Electrical appliances are starting to spark, the TV smokes and turns off! There is a loud pitch in my ears, like after you hear something really loud... I can feel my mouth moving but can't seem to hear... I start to panic.. I decide it's time to run, I open the door only to be engulfed by light... It's so bright most everything is white... I'm squinting so much my eyes are almost closed... Blocking it with my hand, but that's not helping... The whole time taking in radiation, I can feel it pulsating through my body... Am I going blind? Is this the end? The heat is almost unbearable.. The Sun is becoming a supernova... I've got to find shelter... I can't see... I touch my hand on the hood of a car, don't know if it's mine or not... and my hand sizzles! Jesus that's hot! Then all of a sudden poof!

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