i'm new around the writer's forum, but i wanted to dive right in and get some ideas out here for paranormal and metaphysical poems. if anyone has
written or wants to write a piece about anything on these topics [anything from OBE, telepathy, ghosts, etc etc, ie anything found in the paranormal
forums here on ATS], i would love to bounce ideas off you, critique, and vice-versa.
here's a poem that i actually posted on TheDuckster's thread, just a few days ago that got me thinking about it all...
Originally posted by banyan
presenting your soul on a platter letting
its butter drip over onto the tearful whispering
those lips of your sister, scorned and scarred
like a mirror of shattered skittles - the reds
and yellows mostly allowing her breathe
to be my death - or at least my undoing
i know her words, the daggers that draw
pictures of red playgrounds - the metal
things that go round round round and i
vomit out reds yellows and this time green,
the grass has caught me, my soul and essence
out-of-body spinning to your ecstasy.
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