posted on Feb, 23 2008 @ 03:56 PM
All these writers and no help with my little poem....
I changed it a little. Originally, I wrote that around 15 years ago when I had my own "Queen of Pain" in my life.
Here's the original:
When I'm dreaming
I can be anything I want to be
When I'm drowning
I can only gasp for air
When you woke
You thought I was someone else
When you slept
You watched me as I drowned
I only changed one word, but I like the original better. I waited too long and was unable to edit my original post. No one on here can come up with
more to add to this poem? I suppose it's pretty good all by itself. At least I thought so 15 years ago.....(and still think it shows some
You see, it's about being in a miserable relationship. The only time I was enjoying myself was when I was asleep and able to dream and pretend that
things were different. When I was awake, I was drowning....suffocating, gasping for air.
My wonderful partner at the time wasn't always waking up with me next to her, thus, she thought I was someone else this particular morning. And when
she was sleeping, she watched me die. She didn't try to save me.
Actually, life with her was the same. She was watching me die every day and never tried to save me. I finally saved myself!! I was in a very
different place back then.......
I will be posting some other stuff on here....feel free to tell me if any of it sucks or if any of it is any good.....what good is art without