Planet xv253 (AIASP)

Good Job, Antar - very thought-provoking...

Coincidentally, I wrote about a troglodyte myself (only I called him something else).

Nice!

Short and sweet antar. Nice story. The beginning started to sound sexy there for a second but turned out to be an awesome short, short story. It really makes me think about how this could happen to earth and we could all be gone in a second. Just makes you want to live it up and have no regrets about life. star flag

Bravo antar. Fine piece of fiction. Excellent use of visualizations. I really liked it. I suggest you begin work on a novel. Starred and flagged.