Couldn't figure out anywhere else to post this.

So I was writing a couple things. Late last night and late tonight. Posted it on chat and was told to post it up. Don't know where it goes, but if the mods have a better place to put it, let me know.

Here ya go:

First one. Lets call It "Fading"

Oh unpredictable world
You betray me, my cold hearted friend
A sudden twist in our fate
Fallen to the ground, where I should stand

Time grows slow, the world will fade
I can hear the willows whispering
A song they will seldom sing
The ballad of a soul, soon to part

In time, all is forgotten
All is forgiven, balance and peace
My time here seems overstay
Enjoy this chaotic harmony

I can hear the rhythmic song
Played within my body, the tempo slows
The song has now been complete
Fallen to the ground, now where I lay


Second one we will call, "The Cursed"

Another day has gone by
Endless walking on this shadowed earth
Among all these fallen soul
I am the only one who is cursed

every night I lay my head
Reveling imprisoned memories
Grabbing onto long lost hope
While weeping sorrowed symphonies

The flood of change strikes again
Leaving behind only dirt and sand
And a house a memories
This lonesome house we built together

And as this endless dream ends
This shadowed earth has done its worst
Among all these fallen souls
I am the only one who is cursed

Dude yes! Im so glad you posted your art here! Hope you post more later on! Well see ya in chat bro!

any feedback appriciated.

not a one liner lol

Amazing.Very well written.Keep writing.
Ahem..I believe The Duckster is correct here..we need a forum for poetry.
Any Chance Amigos?

thanks for the feedback. I assume this will be moved to the poetry forum once it is created.

I only got two replies to this?

And btw, did a peotry forum ever get through?