SSSC ~~ANGEL~~

reply to post by MountainStar

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MountainStar...I believe I should be thanking you for sharing that with me.
I wish I had seen my mothers spirit leave.Might have been a little more calming for me,as I was alone with just the Doctor and nurse...who left the room right after to let me say goodbye.It is the single most horrible thing I have been through in my life,with the exception of looking at her in the coffin at the funeral,and watching her lowered into the ground. That was the only point in my life that has literally brought me to my knees.
The fact that some have seen the spirit leave the body, gives me a sense of peace.
Thank you.

Hi AD.

Spooky tale! I'm pretty sure It'll ba a fallen angel coming for me!

I'll get around to your others in a bit.

MonKey

reply to post by ChiKeyMonKey

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Hey Chikey, thanks.I hope you get your wish...after you live a long life.

What more can I say AD? This story is the saddest and most deserving of the top position in the finals. Thankyou for having the courage to tell the story.

Happy Halloween my dear friend

A moving work AD. I liked the sense of "there-ness" and the mental imagery of the colloquial stage of the familiar. I liked the "uncertanty" of his and the angel's disposition. Both had need beyond the written. That sense of longing and want typifies the "human" commonalities that makes good story telling. "ANGEL" would lend itself well to a spoke word performance art presentation.

"Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness."- Allen Ginsberg

Dollnean'

Mira

Thanks Mira..I see Dollnean has taken on new meanings.
So instead of Namaste I will say,
"I celebrate the place in you where we are both Dollnean."

Patsy to Edina: Absolutley Fabulous Dollnean Dawwwlingg.

Dollnean is duality. Just because we choose Dollnean... It's like ice cream. LOL. I suggest we develop a tool. A community Dollnean color rating system. LOL. But I think the button space is already reserved for new toys. It what comes "after" that has me interested.

You do realize that you are a published author, correct? Shoppe yourself.

One completes the other.

Pennsylvania six-five-oh-oh-oh, I love Dad's stuff. I gotta do quadratic equations - I don't use a calculator so... big hug, kisses.

Mira

[edit on 30-10-2007 by Mira_of_lurk0more]

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Hmm I wish I were published.Could use the extra dough...
Later Mira...
>hugs<

another great story, beautifully told classic theme.