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posted on Jan, 20 2004 @ 06:44 PM
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[Edited on 17-2-2004 by AmbientNoise]




posted on Jan, 20 2004 @ 08:22 PM
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Great story. Love where it's going, and I especially admire the setting. Keep it up.

DE



posted on Jan, 20 2004 @ 09:57 PM
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Nice!!!

I love the whole immortal concept and a bit of romance too.



posted on Jan, 21 2004 @ 06:07 PM
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Thanks for the feedback, folks! DE, the story's quite finished really, with the Fissure as a metaphor for their relationship and its unchanging dynamics...



posted on Jan, 22 2004 @ 03:01 PM
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Very good story, AmbientNoise.
I was wondering how it was going to pan out - I thought it was going to be some crypto monster or lost civilisation - excellent twist.

regards
flc



posted on Jan, 23 2004 @ 12:44 AM
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Thanky, flc! I see yer in Schkaughtlind (trying to approximate Sean Connery's accent there
). Hmmmm. That's got me pondering more ancient culture and lore now...
We may have to chat sometime.

AN



posted on Jan, 23 2004 @ 04:50 AM
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Originally posted by AmbientNoise
Thanky, flc! I see yer in Schkaughtlind (trying to approximate Sean Connery's accent there
). Hmmmm. That's got me pondering more ancient culture and lore now...
We may have to chat sometime.

AN


any time, buddy
plenty of scottish folklore about



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