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here's the poem i want to post

Comfort Zone

comfort zone oh comfort zone why do i feel alone

If i step outside my comfort zone i enter the unknown

i must grow my comfort zone, i must do it on my own

i feel like i'm in a bind, so i open up my mind

I fix this and that, and put on a new hat

when u know u own ur mind, it's an amazing find

then why the # am i in a bind, could it be "my" motives aren't defined or really even "mine"

so i go back deeper in my mind, i don't always like what i find

I'm gonna fix everything, cause i know i can be perfect

change can occur in an instant, yet perfection seems so distant

so don't get too greedy with your mind, you'll get stuck in a bind

i'm gonna go back to my mind, love myself first, seek with my heart, and be kind

fill my life with pleasure doing things "I" treasure

i don't care what others measure



"are minds and body's are never broken, they always work PERFECTLY or EXACTLY how we BELEIVED they would"


[edit on 27-7-2007 by cpdaman]

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Doesn't that need updating? I haven't seen a debate on for ages and in any case Nygdan hasn't been on since March.