I think you need to go more slowly over your submission and correct some of the grammar. I would edit it for you, but to be honest I am not certain
what you were trying to say. I think it is great you made an effort to contribute to the tinWiki, however some of your sentences can use some
improvement. For example, here are the first two sentences from your article:
They say is some sort of psionic energy that is called psi energy. People believe that it can be animated so that people can see it but also
that the more you less you believe in it the less of a chance that you will have of making one, and the vice versapsi-balls
You should expand upon the idea of what psionic energy is. Also, a good stating place for creating a tinWiki article is the
tinWiki tutorial. All articles should have related links and relevant discusion threads listed.
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