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a simple poem

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posted on Mar, 15 2007 @ 09:51 PM
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ok so this is a poem i wrote for my gf and i dunno if its any good.
anyone care to look at it?


the beauty of her auburn hair...
flowing graceful in the wind
i gaze into her eyes with care
the love of my life, she walks with me


for my kaiten.... my beloved....



btw kaiten is japanese for my beloved one

[edit on pmpThu, 15 Mar 2007 21:58:10 -0500/02/91 by adamiskthespacepirateking]



posted on Mar, 19 2007 @ 07:04 PM
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oh well my gf liked the poem and thats all that matters it was for her after all...



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