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Betrayal (rant)

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posted on Feb, 20 2007 @ 04:02 PM
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Just needed a place to vent....

Betrayal

As I lay defeated in a pile of filth
Reeling from yet another betrayal
In a long, long list of betrayals

She stands tall over me, cackling with glee
And battering me with an endless barrage
Of coffee cups drawn from the kitchen pantry

She hurls them at me with all her considerable might
And I shudder and cry out in pain
As they impact and shatter into
A thousand jagged pieces all over my body

Dear one! I am in such pain!
Will you give me no solace, even now?
Will you only gloat and celebrate your complete victory?

Just know that I love you even now
Though love is cruel....




posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 11:30 AM
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This isn't love on her part. You don't hurt people that you love like that. I'm very sorry............



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 11:40 AM
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GET OUT NOW BEFORE ITS TOO LATE



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 11:52 AM
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to clarify,

This is a sort of allegorical poem/story and not a portrayal of a real event or relationship! Thanks for the concern though and sorry to startle you folks.




posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 01:07 PM
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Maybe you should become a writer, and post your poems there.

That was my first thought when I read it...that it was a poem of sorts...but it also says it's a rant... There's the confusion



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 01:44 PM
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yes, a rant in the form of allegory and poetry

lots of people on here like to express themselves with poetry, I didn't know it was wrong to do so?

:bnghd:



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 01:49 PM
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Originally posted by millerman
I didn't know it was wrong to do so?

:bnghd:


Oh please stop it
I'm not cracking on you, Honest. I'm simply suggesting that "if" you like to write things, you should become an ats writer, and post some of your stuff in the writing forum

Edit spelling

[edit on 2/21/2007 by jensouth31]



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 01:56 PM
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If you are interested in becoming a Writer, I believe you merely have to contact our Super-Mod worldwatcher via u2u and ask for the title.

You should give it a shot.



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 02:04 PM
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Originally posted by jensouth31

Oh please stop it
I'm not cracking on you, Honest. I'm simply suggesting that "if" you like to write things, you should become an ats writer, and post some of your stuff in the writing forum

[edit on 2/21/2007 by jensouth31]



You know hun, I would love to be able to just read and write, and use computers all day.... unfortunately circumstances dictate that I must always work, or be looking for work.... too bad ATS doesn't pay! LOL



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 02:08 PM
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Okay hun....wink, wink.

Chissler is right it's very simple to achieve writer status.

It's your choice hun



posted on Feb, 21 2007 @ 02:48 PM
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hey, I like it when you call me that!



posted on Feb, 22 2007 @ 12:00 PM
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Originally posted by millerman
hey, I like it when you call me that!


Did it give you a warm fuzzy feeling?

I hope so........everbody needs one of those occasionally



posted on Feb, 22 2007 @ 12:12 PM
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Originally posted by jensouth31

Originally posted by millerman
hey, I like it when you call me that!


Did it give you a warm fuzzy feeling?



No, you merely hardened my resolve..... to succeed!




I hope so........everbody needs one of those occasionally



But not too much now, or people get addicted!!



posted on Feb, 23 2007 @ 09:15 AM
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Well, either way, I’m glad your resolve has been hardened, and you feel your resolution is good. Yes, addictions can be a real problem if people don’t watch out



posted on Feb, 23 2007 @ 09:30 AM
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Originally posted by jensouth31
Well, either way, I’m glad your resolve has been hardened, and you feel your resolution is good.



Well, no, there was no resolution, and now I am feeling blue..... :shk::shk:

[edit on 23-2-2007 by millerman]



posted on Feb, 23 2007 @ 01:06 PM
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Originally posted by millerman
I am feeling blue..... :shk::shk:



Awwww...

Just don't be passing any of that blue around...I don't like to be blue, it messes up the cloud that I like to float on



posted on Feb, 23 2007 @ 07:36 PM
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well if the chick is bad enough to write poetry about than she must be toxic to you somehow. I say unless you guys are married, and even then, walk. Plain and simple Walk away from her and don't look back. Nobody should have to live their life like that.



posted on Feb, 23 2007 @ 08:12 PM
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again, it wasn't about any one specific chick.... more like women in general.... and being betrayed.... and not just being betrayed by women, but by friends and other men too....

and I wish relationships were that simple, you know, walk away from ones that hurt you, stay with ones that treat you well.... but sometimes people inadvertently hurt people that they love very much....



posted on Feb, 25 2007 @ 07:02 AM
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I don’t know how to read you! First you say this is just a form of writing, and nothing personal. Then you say you’re blue…and now I see your signature. Are you all right?
Are you sure this isn’t deeper than you let on?



posted on Feb, 25 2007 @ 08:10 AM
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Jen

Well thank you for your concern dear!

I am OK, just dealing with a LOT of s### right now.... among other things I recently lost a job which I was rather counting on...

Blue:shk::shk: was a joke, but if you didn't get it, it's OK.... hehehe

Thanks again for caring... it means a lot



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