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posted on Jan, 1 2007 @ 05:37 PM
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I'm new here ... and I was wondering if anyone would like to help with a parody. It's about 9/11.

I was writing a parody of "I will survive" by Gloria Gaynor.
But I'm stuck. Maybe someone would like to finish it.
(easy to read using notepad with word wrap off)

Title: "We will Revive"

original/parody

First I was afraid (Right after 9/11)
I was petrified (I was terrified)
kept thinking I could never live (kept thinking of Osama Bin laden)
without you by my side (in my dreams at night)
but then I spent so many nights (but then I researched so many nights)
thinking how you did me wrong (of how, those towers came tumbling down)(of why, those towers came down so fast)(of why, those towers came tumblin down)
and I grew strong (and I grew strong)
I learned how to carry on (I learned that thermate took em down)
and so you're back (9/11 was a fraud)
from outer space (without a doubt)
I just walked in to find you here (I just searched nine eleven to find the key)
with that sad look upon your face (and I sorted out, the whole truth)*(and I sorted out, the truth)
I should have changed (that)my stupid lock (I should have known the real plan)
I should have made you leave your key (I should have known my enemy)
If I had known for just one second (If I had known for just one second)
you'd be back to bother me (they wanted to enslave me)[or *imprison*] (they'd be wanting to enslave me)

Go on now go walk out the door (So I got now every one I know)(Go on now go get some help)(go on now go seek the truth)
just turn around now (get together now)(just do it now)
'cause you're not welcome anymore ('cause we can't stand alone anymore)(cause we can't do it alone anymore)(cause we can't speak alone anymore)
weren't you the one who tried to hurt me with goodbye (wern't those just the sillist lies you've heard?)(they were the ones who tried to fool us with their lies)
Did you think I'd crumble (Did they think we're stupid)
Did you think I'd lay down and die (Did they think we'd shut up and cry)
Oh no, not I (oh no, no way)
I will survive (we will revive)
Oh as long as i know how to love (oh as long as we demand our rights)
I know I will stay alive (I know we'll be alright)
I've got all my life to live (we've got nowhere left to hide) (we've got to stand our ground)
I've got all my love to give (we've got to do what's right) (we've got no choice but to fight)
and I'll survive (and we'll revive)
I will survive (hey-hey) (we will revive(hey-hey)) *[hey-hey think of something else]

It took all the strength I had (It takes all the courage we have)(It'll take all the strength we have)
not to fall apart (just to stand apart)(not to break apart)
kept trying hard to mend (keep trying hard to mend) (Please don't get caught up)
the pieces of my broken heart (the principles of our broken rights)(the rights of our broken laws)(the laws of our missing rights) (being stuck being left or right)
and I spent oh so many nights (and I spent oh so many nights)
just feeling sorry for myself (just feeling violated)
I used to cry (I used to cry)
But now I hold my head up high (But now I hold my
and you see me (
somebody new
I'm not that chained up little person
still in love with you
and so you felt like dropping in
and just expect me to be free
and now I'm saving all my loving
for someone who's loving me

[I'd put the rest of the song but there's a chr. limit]

(I want this sung at every karaoke bar)
(I want to see tons of youtube videos of this)
(I know it sucks. Please fix it)
(Please post this on other 9/11 forums)



posted on Jan, 1 2007 @ 05:42 PM
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Hello, and welcome to ATS.



posted on Jan, 3 2007 @ 02:42 PM
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Not very appropriate.

I'm new myself though its not something to joke about even though there are way more people dying around the world every day.

I'm an Aussie right, I remember the morning of Sept 11 2001 it effected the whole world. Please don't make parodies.

Man even our schools basically shut down that day and I was doing my VCE (YR11, or FORM 5 or whatever u call it).

It was a bad day for everyone many people of many nationalities died.

IMO dwelling on it makes the terrorists happy. Thats what they want. Terrorists shouldnt even get news time, they are worthless pieces of crap that should be ignored.

And before you go bagging me out I know people who were in the Bali bombings. Terrorists should be ignored. Media brings them (or others =( ) power.



posted on Jan, 4 2007 @ 01:08 PM
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Interesting, I wasn't expecting negative feedback. And haven't received any anywhere else.

But you do have a point. But not really. This isn't a "true parody" It is using the broad definition of parody, like when christians make up different lyrics to songs.

I probably won't finish it. But I think someone smarter than I should run with it. It is a great idea.




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