Unfortunately, I'm with lord finesse. (Overlooking the fact that basic paragraph structure and punctuation would be a "nice to have",) it's all
just a bit "too much", don't you think?
You'll already have a hard time getting some people to believe the Mothman story. Then you add the lake (pond) monster bit, and you had to throw in a
"demon doll", "lights" (both underwater and above ground?) and "playing children" in for good measure?
Possibly 4 different paranormal activities in one area? Mothman, a lake monster, UFOs/will-o-wisps and ghost/poltergeist activity?
A paranormal investigator will give his right you-know-what for an opportunity to spend some time there.
And that's my question/query. If there is all this activity, why do your parents just accept it? Why is the only inquiry into this a post on a forum?
Why no effort to get behind it all by some actual investigation? Like cameras, getting someone to check out the pond (I'll do it for you
You know. At this stage we don't have much to go on.
Let's say you were to add another story, say about fairies or a dragon, and "cross your heart and hope to die" that it's the truth, all we have is
You get what I'm saying. Paranormal and more important, cryptozoloogy should be approached in a very scientific manner. Your approach towards it
should be like-wise.
I really, really want to believe you, honestly I do. At the moment photographs and/or videos are barely able to stand their ground, thus we would love
to get some more material from your side - other than a story and more stories.
Unfortunately that's the way it works - because of a million hoaxes. But that shouldn't discourage you from posting or sharing your stories. You'll
just have to be willing to accept the responses based on what you give us.
[edit on 18-10-2006 by Gemwolf]