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(SMSHC) (d4rk kn1ght's)

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posted on Sep, 12 2006 @ 05:33 PM
The Police cruiser slammed to a halt in front of the Church. It was a call that had dispatch screaming down the airwaves, and every officer dreaded hearing.
"All units we have multiple officers down, I repeat we have multiple officers down at 3045 Creech way - all units respond".
Only three units had been unavailable, and they were booking in some juveniles caught trying to set fire to the dumpster behind an old garage. Their petty vandalism was keeping 4 officers busy, when their fellow brothers needed them most.
The scene was a blood bath. The priest lay pinned to the door by a crude spear through the shoulder, his large cruxifix buried deep into his groin. His eyes flicked to the officer, and he let out a primevil scream, a scream of sheer terror.
"You must burn them with fire! Fire! Burn them or you will..." his voice petered off into the darkness as blood filled his mouth. he died with a whimper and a slow gurgling sound..
It was carnage. But no bodies. Blood filled every inch of the church floor, bullet shells lain scattered around, with sprays of blood indicating a weapon had hit a target.
"Maz, where the hell are the bodies? and for the love of God what is that!?"
High above them a body swung in the rafters. It was all the officers could do to stop vomiting at the crime scene.
"Damn ripped his throat out clean.. We need back up!"

The radio ripped into life.

"Unit 44 at location of arson. I have found 6 bodies, burnt real bad, in the dumpster... Fire fighters are removing them for the coroner now.."

They looked at each other as a group. The Church doors slammed shut. Again the radio ripped into life. It was no voice, only deep guteral screams of terror.
"Get out! get out of the church their coming back for you! Get... aaarrrghhh no! PLEASE NOOOO!"

The officers all drew their weapons up to face the door.

"This is bad Maz - hell of a piece of work to do on halloween night.. really hit the fan this time buddy!"


The doors slammed open, and the Officers poured bullets at the shapes in the shadows.... Then a hand gripped Maz by the shoulder.

"Honey, Honey your having a nightmare again, wake up!" He looked around the room, lit only by the fading light of the october day.

"Dam that dream was crappy... Damn dreaming of vampires and killer kids at this stupid time of the year!" His wife looked into his eyes, kissed him on the forehead, and stood up. 2no trick or treating for you tonight trooper!" she looked serene stood by the bed.
"Hey you know what, i'll go fix a meal for you before you go to work." She turned to leave, holding the door handle.
"Oh before you get up, some friends are here to see you." Opening the door, four small figures stood framed in the light.
"Thought you could escape by waking up did you? Bitch, your gonna die real slow for that one."

The last thing he felt was blood welling up in his throat, the last things he saw were the cruxifix rammed into his groin, and the slow serene smile as his wife walked out of the door..
Added (SMSHC) to title

[edit on 12-9-2006 by masqua]

posted on Sep, 13 2006 @ 09:01 AM
Bloody and frightening!
Great job!

posted on Sep, 13 2006 @ 09:10 AM
Wow... grabbed my attention from the very start and held it...

Good Work

I know this is for the contest... but you should consider adding more to this story and run with it....

posted on Sep, 13 2006 @ 10:21 PM
Gore and body parts, nether invasion by crucifix...oh, boy, this is a nice chilling little tale of a nightmare come true.

Setting the pace for the contest, eh?

Nice work, d4rk knight.

posted on Nov, 8 2006 @ 01:36 PM
glad you like it peeps -

I have an absolute beauty for you all if you liked that one..

I'll write it out and place it in BTS for you all.

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