Each of you did a great job, but grim you grabbed that cake and ate it babe!
You could make the ATS theme song, how cool would that be

NOT FULL FILE

[edit on 9/18/2006 by PuRe EnErGy]

not bad PE, a lot better than I could do heh, but I do believe Grim is still the house favorite.



I'm still waiting on Russian Soldier, WestPoint, and Niteboy (bring that naw'leanz style mayne)

bump.

Where are my other contestants?


Did Grim make y'all that nervous?


don't blame ya's


but still get your casts up, you may suprise us. never underestimate your self

Hey, Pure Energy - I really like your stuff! Great job 'specially the second one.

BH you can sang, so imo you can bust a flow, a poet and you know it so do it to it and be heard!

<3

I'm trying. I don't have a lot of time to devote to it. That's the problem. How long is this challenge 'on'?

forevah...

or until I get bored


Just dooo eet eehh!

represent for all the ladies <3

[edit on 20-9-2006 by Lysergic]

Originally posted by Lysergic
represent for all the ladies <3

Not even! More like all the white-girl-hippie rappers!

Saphronia, dear, where's your contribution??? HMMM????

BUMP... (and the lyrics to the second track I posted)

These days... praise... and wisdom is tainted
its more bout clichés and more ways to get payment
an' thats why I'm here... To help make a statement
music's our respondsibility, emcees need retrainin'

School isn't lessons its the market for delicatessens
we're so reliant with our routine our lifes a constant fu****' history lesson

Institutions to insure our children don't run rampant
give them something pure but critique it and stamp it

marks are our life so we grow with that strife
too bad the bonds with certain individuals weren't kept that tight

but thats life... right? .. you think its gonna change?
not the way we treat and keep our kids brains shortchanged

Individuals learn through experience and life
but lets keep they ass locked up till we think that its a'right

and when they grow... and misbehave... we can put em in jail
we so blind to their problems... we're skimming through em like we're blind... and they braille

another bump to make the book, but by itself just another crook who coulda been in a slump but will never get to relook

darkness seems... the absence of light
but when your institutionalized the darkness helps you fight

So schools do one thing... weed the prophets from the fillers
but its true... drop outs... all.. turn.. into.. killers cuz thats where the skill is Not Literal Killers (ignorance killers)

in the minds of those who won't conform, bring on the brainstorm
it rains for a reason thats why they mark you so you won't believe in yourself
always at yourself is no help

the government is the literal satan, mark my statement
I'm not just creating conterversy, go on murk me
like yah murked pac, but we won't stop, till yah'll drop

pennies from our pockets and you won't stop it, you keep expanding
taking from us without us handing, now thats understanding
how mans history is planning to undermine and lable crime crime

define starvation and taking some food, jail em, thats rude
or three strikes -true- we got no clue why they do what they do till we walk in they shoes
thats the meaning of stay true

your clueless, got it twisted and all those enlisted
can shoot a gun so they think they gifted
got an olive branch? lift it, u'll feel lifted

Killers be killed by they visions or by decisions
either a trigger finger or some bloody figure in they visions
a stitch in mind but they wish rewind a lotta the time

Salaries paid by tax payers, our own slayers and justifiers
layers of deciet the guilty sit in the seat of judgement
and they act like they ain't budging, thats disgustin'

Thats why I'm bustin' hatred for the lust in your eye (‘the’ eye)
I dispise the rise of evil people in office
I mean even the coppers, in the street'll have you beat
life ain't sweet or a bowl a cherries unless yah barely using yah brain
or like being trained an' if you say I'm insane
then I like being insane

Ayo, and I'm Out...

I have my song written, but won't get to recording it till Monday probably. Maybe Tuesday. Woo-Hoo! My first rap song, yo!

Yo BH!

Excellent, and props to you for the song and the message.

To all, sorry but I'm not contributing.

Benevolent Heretic

I am impressed. Seriously. That was wonderful.... I could feel your heart ...

I guess the old saying that God can bring good things come out of evil happenings is true. I heard it in your music. All that time that was 'wasted' and yet look what a gem you brought out of the muck ...

While this may be more rap like, I found the first one more enjoyable to listen to, just my .02.

GREAT work Grim and BH. Thank you!

Gotta say tho - grims da reel rappah heah.





.

[edit on 24-9-2006 by soficrow]

BH, love the message in yours

I got your back