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(WILD) Wilderness Challenge Commentary

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posted on Aug, 7 2006 @ 11:22 AM
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Seeing as I'm a bit of a tool, I really didn't think about feedback for the Wilderness Writing Challenge that's currently running. So, please post comments about entries here. Writers enjoy the feedback, trust me.

DE




posted on Aug, 7 2006 @ 08:31 PM
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That first one from Mojo was pretty good



posted on Aug, 8 2006 @ 06:20 PM
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Thanks vegemite glad you liked it, i liked EdenKaia's. Nice mood to it.



posted on Aug, 11 2006 @ 04:10 AM
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Uggggggh!!! I HATE writing in the present tense... That felt like a tooth extraction...



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OK, mojo4sale I just finished reading your entry...and the others. That's spooky! It's like we were writing the same story from two different vantage points... When I saw you reuse the opening line at the end, I almost fell out of my chair!

Get out of my head, will ya????



...or maybe I was in yours...



[edit on 11-8-2006 by loam]



posted on Aug, 11 2006 @ 10:12 AM
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Loam, I enjoyed it very much.
Can't figure out why the deer never escape.



posted on Aug, 11 2006 @ 05:38 PM
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Very nice Loam, we both even used sated. Weird
Btw i sometimes think theres more than enough room in my head for at least a couple more people, your always welcome.


Great minds think alike


I liked yours too Siege.
The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.

[edit on 11/8/06 by mojo4sale]



posted on Aug, 11 2006 @ 10:56 PM
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Originally posted by mojo4sale
Weird


I agree.



Originally posted by SIEGE
Can't figure out why the deer never escape.


For one, there are too damn many of them...at least in some parts of the world.

I might add, however, that the one I used is endangered.
(Would you have expected anything less from me?
)

Thanks for the complements, guys!


I enjoyed your contributions too....


[edit on 11-8-2006 by loam]



posted on Aug, 16 2006 @ 08:31 PM
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Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.



posted on Aug, 24 2006 @ 12:00 PM
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Originally posted by mojo4sale
Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.


Thanks mojo4sale, hey, how about selling me some of that mojo so I'll be a winner on the next contest, eh?


Btw, I liked yours too.



posted on Aug, 24 2006 @ 05:28 PM
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Originally posted by curiousity

Originally posted by mojo4sale
Liked your second story Curiousity, those wascally wabbits. Btw not saying i didnt like the first one.


Thanks mojo4sale, hey, how about selling me some of that mojo so I'll be a winner on the next contest, eh?


Btw, I liked yours too.


The mojo's on it's way. The leg bone of a black cat that's been killed in a graveyard at midnight in a cloth sack. Use it wisely, no one can see or touch your mojo or it will lose it's power!



posted on Aug, 24 2006 @ 06:02 PM
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Originally posted by mojo4sale
The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.


One word.......Bambi. Of course, I suppose death is an escape, when looked at from a certain perspective.



posted on Aug, 24 2006 @ 06:06 PM
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Originally posted by EdenKaia

Originally posted by mojo4sale
The deer only ever escape in Disney movies im afraid.


One word.......Bambi. Of course, I suppose death is an escape, when looked at from a certain perspective.


I thought of that as i was writing it but went ahead and posted anyway, ohh well, most disney movies



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