Random thoughts, little or no coherency, and many spelling mistakes. Lots of jumbled imagery leaving the reader confused and bewildered. Very poorly executed and lacks the oomph needed for a really good rant.
A Re-ranting will be neccessary but you must wait the intitial re-rant application time of 30 days to be re-rated. Please come prepared for next time with a blank sheet of scratch paper and a #2 pencil with eraser.
Good luck!
Pie

