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Topic started on 30-3-2006 @ 09:45 PM by The Vagabond
It has come up that not much collaboration happens here, and I suspect this is because of certain creative differences between various authors and the friction that creates. Characters go schizophrenic, settings morph wildly, and the plot changes every chapter.

We can stop that from happening to this story.

What I want to do is get between 3 and 6 writers together on the ground-floor of a story, no late entries, nothing gets written until we have a common concept.

We'll get together, and once we have a team, we'll come up with a very general theme, ie: "intrapersonal conflict set in a highschool" or "Interpersonal conflict set in the Pentagon." etc.

Once we've got that, we'll build specific characters and specific setting that compliment the conflict we want to create. We'll discuss name, physical attributes, history, mentality, etc then all do an exercise where we write him in a specific situation. The goal will be that before we start writing the actual story, when we put the same to characters in the same situation, we all write roughly the same personality- if not necessarily the same result.

Once we've confirmed a common concept for characters and setting, only then do we start with Chapter 1.

The idea here is that great writing is natural- you don't force the characters actions, but you empathize with the mentality of the person you've created and can predict what he would do if he was real. Theoretically, if we all share a common concept of the characters and situation, we can all write as one and create a story together without sabotaging one another.

This will be a great way to excercise our personal skills and get to know one another... so who's up for it?


reply posted on 6-4-2006 @ 01:31 PM by The Vagabond
Sorry I'm late getting back to you.

Are you thinking in terms of sort of a commedy, going with "space vodka"?

The sci-fi thing and a smuggler seem like a good place to start and I would like to run with that.

I think a little more of an action/suspense thing would be cool though, and we can use the details to drive that, perhaps by altering the resource which is at the center of the conflict.
I think the conflict becomes hard to swallow (no pun intended) if it's all over hard liquor.

We could go serious and still have a very quirky and amusing world by making the resource something vital- water for example.

OR if we wanted to run the alcohol angle, we'd have to weave something into this world which makes the alcohol very important. For instance, suppose there is some nasty bacteria on this mining planet which contaminates the local water, and which is generally very expensive to deal with, presenting a great opportunity for the antagonists to make a lot of money. This brings them into conflict with bootleggers and smugglers because their ability to force the expensive water treatment (or just imported water) on the planet is dependent upon stopping simpler sterilization methods (such as alcohol) from being made available in sufficient quantity.

So, I guess the question is, do we want a serious plot.

Then we can start sketching characters. When you get the chance, sketch out the bootlegger or smuggler- whichever he ends up being (or several of them if he's not a loner) and I'll do the same, and we can start integrating our ideas into single characters.


reply posted on 6-4-2006 @ 10:38 PM by fingapointa

We could go serious and still have a very quirky and amusing world by making the resource something vital- water for example.


Kewl! I wasn't thinking of a comedy, I wanted to use the space vodka thing more as a novel point of departure. Maybe it can be used a tool for control of the miners etc. I don't think it should be the central subject of the story.


OR if we wanted to run the alcohol angle, we'd have to weave something into this world which makes the alcohol very important. For instance, suppose there is some nasty bacteria on this mining planet which contaminates the local water, and which is generally very expensive to deal with, presenting a great opportunity for the antagonists to make a lot of money.


That's more along the lines I was thinking of. Basically,something like, the smuggler uncovers a plan that is going to pollute the surrounding solar system system, destroy the mining colony and miners, and the smugglers' cash cow. She then use's her contacts with both the miners and the managers and her relative free movement to expose the plot and try to avert it. Or not, we can trash it if the idea seems unworkable.


So, I guess the question is, do we want a serious plot.


Yeah, I think so. Like you said " We could go serious and still have a very quirky and amusing world".

I think having a non essential resource in the mix (and people behaving badly to get it) might allow some examination of human folly and greed.


I think a little more of an action/suspense thing would be cool though


Definately, feel free to go the hack. I want it dripping in drama and deep fried in suspense. Yum!
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