Very nice poem. I enjoyed it a lot. It seems that every poem you write, I have one to follow it up with. So, here it is.
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The first time I saw that glint in your eyes
Everything in the world froze
You looked like a star up in the sky
As beautiful as a rose
Your voice is like an angel
Came down and caressed my ears
WIth the most beatiful of sounds
That no one could ever fear
When I go to sleep at night
And everything around me is dark
You are what brightens my world
You are what gave me that spark
I thank you for giving me hope
I thank you for setting me free
And that is why I always wish
You were lying here next to me

