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*Red Sky of Time *The Surrealist




Topic started on 14-7-2005 @ 12:33 AM by The Surrealist


Red Sky

The Red Sky of Time
It dances above me
I could swear it cries
Is the colors to darken
To die

Red sky of time
Cant you at least
Believe in something real

Red sky of time
As you spread you die
Luminous amongst the ceiling
Twilight recedes
And like the sea
They drowned
Into the horizon

Red sky of time
Can you see
Can help
To notice we are blind
You're darkening
As the sky turns black
Fueled be charcoal clouds

You fade away
I sit here wishing in your midst
I swear you cried
The Red Sky of Time
You're a mirage
Shaking only within my mind











[I watched the sunset and it reminded me of life]
The Surrealist 2005

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reply posted on 14-7-2005 @ 12:43 AM by The Surrealist


Disoriented Reality

Restless nights cradle me
As I fall inside myself
Nothing but a black pit of guilt
But lies surface from underneath the cotton
The cotton than smothers me
I hold on tight for life
The one that helped bring me here
The one that pulls me down









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The Surrealist 2005




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reply posted on 14-7-2005 @ 01:16 AM by The Surrealist


Im gonna watch the new movie GUNNER PALACE.
Ill tell you if its motavationall wich douse help writing, ok here I go, seya for now.
(Idontknowhowtospell)
(Its never stoped anything though)

So I did watch it last night, and it was very differant, I dont think people here can comprehend how life is for the average day soldure or civilion for that matter.
It really makes you think though, and its good that they didnt put much carnage in it, there are many firefights though. A lot of morters, every night.

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reply posted on 12-4-2008 @ 05:59 AM by The Surrealist


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Very symbolic. Very meaningful personally.



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