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Vesuvius poems

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posted on Jun, 3 2005 @ 09:46 AM
Hello, alrighty my other thread was just poems for Love and such. And i created this one to put in any other poems that are not about love...

Okay, this poem i wrote last night, it may seem a little confusing. But it's a wise old teacher soul(such as krishna or buddha or Jesus) watching mankind evolve, and the observation of endless death and war is taking it's toll on the soul, and begins to grow miserable watching all the destruction!
So enjoy....

Back Again

Through the years and years alone,
I see death come and go...
Pouring, crying, rivers of blood,
The path of destruction,
Brings little more...
Moaning, crying,
To no avail...
Into the pit,
my misery grows...
Why won't they listen,
Why can't they believe...
There is more to them,
Than what their eyes first see...
They have power,
So they think...
Those who are mighty,
Conquer their minds...
Not their enemies,
Not their foes....
Still they look,
On what is not real...
So down i must go,
And show them once more....

Shazam....wonderful right? THankyou....*Shuffles off to a dark corner*

[edit on 3-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jun, 4 2005 @ 11:09 AM
Hey, allright i was trying to write this poem about a child whos basically forgotten by his parents and all around him. He's shown utterly no love, and i want the story to eventually end with his death. Yes i know this is a sad poem but it has a deep deep message in it, hopefully you can see it?

Long ago, in a place where stars don't show,
a father and a mother had a child,
in the dark and gloom of a misty land,
the child grew to be forgotten,

Yeah that's ALL I can think of! My mind has just stopped! i dont know what else to write. I need to be depressed or sad to write good poems like this, and im having trouble making my self depressed or sad....i dont have any sad songs or movies i can think of right now... lol And a friend already told me, "Don't force it", or don't try to make urself too deprressed lol Why is sadness so poetic? It truly is is it not?
Well, anyways, all help appreciated....Rivergoddess i suspect you can probably help me, your a great poet! lol
Many thanks,

posted on Jun, 4 2005 @ 11:33 AM
Okay while im waiting for help on the above poem i figured i might post this poem i just wrote 2 1/2 seconds ago here as well....

I'm not entirely sure what this poem means, but i think it's my personal vision of what a goddess or pure and beautiful representation of love is....or something like that. Yeah probably...since i don't believe in gods and goddesses lol, just one El. Allah, Brahman, God, El, whatever you wanna call it.
Embodiment of Love

Misty hair of sweet surrender,
eyes of blue that capture you,
Melodic voice,
Beauty endless,
open arms of endless joy.
Take me off my sweet love goddess,
hold me up into the stars,
Let me touch the light of Heaven,
Kiss me once please don't leave me,
Show me the secrets of all sweet brahman,
never leave me,
else grief will return,
but don't let me keep it,
show it to all,
This is what i pray for,
my goddess of love,
To reach down on all,
And mold hearts of gold.

Okay so, actually it sort of started out with a female reprsentation of love, and then yeah...well you get the point. But remember when im describing the Goddess, in reality im actually describing love!


[edit on 4-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jun, 4 2005 @ 04:33 PM
I thought i would move all my poems from my previous thread into here, so just ignore the other thread for now on, lol.

Highest of Beauties,
yet most ignored,
while hate may destroy,
love remains it only grows.
Through the stars it ever expands,
it holds all together,
it keeps us alive.
This eternal emotion,
more powerful than all.
The path to the light,
beginning of all.

I also wanted to repost this with all of the revisions on it.

[edit on 4-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jun, 4 2005 @ 04:35 PM
I walked across the greeny grass,
I smelt the fumes of fresh baked food.
Those warm and tastey donut-holes!
I bought a dozen and savored them well!!!


posted on Jun, 4 2005 @ 04:41 PM
It's hard to love,
just hold on hard,
just keep it inside,
and you may feel why.

Giver of life,
The most beautiful flower.
Out of love,
Creation spawned.
The planets,
The stars,
All thru love,
Have come and gone.

Never be sad,
Just love your life.
Love your breath,
Love your eyes,
Love your body,
And love your mind.
Learn to love,
Returned or not.

You are here to experience,
So why not love a while.

posted on Jun, 6 2005 @ 01:31 PM
Ever silently...
I listen for your voice,
Hoping always for happiness...
In this life there are struggles and fits,
But if you follow me,
Ill show you whats good...

I love life, yes,
I do i do to,
Now let me tell you why,
Like a perfect circle,
I see everything...

This does this,
And that does that...
Watch the circle...
Watch the cycle...
See how it moves ever on...

Walking strangers,
Walking heartless,
Walking on and on,
Walking they can go...

Some are loving,
Some are hateful,
It just goes to show...
That choice is free will,
Choice is free will...
And how is that not beautiful?

So join me dear friend,
I hope that you will,
Help me walk this circle,
And reach the other end.

Walk my friend with me,
Lets find the lighter side,
Let's go and see.
So my friend now,
Won't you join me?

Drop this world,
Flow with the river,
Don't go against it,
It flows in circles,
It spirals on,
Feel it's love

We can see the stars,
Touch the heavens,
We can fly away,
Along with the circle...

[edit on 6-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

[edit on 9-6-2005 by asala]

[edit on 5-6-2006 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jun, 9 2005 @ 12:46 PM
I don't know what to call this one, but i wrote it listening to a favorite song of mine called hapy child by Tweaker. I hope you enjoy it, i hope you understand, i hope that you embrace it, and cherish it like a child!!!
(i rhyme even when i dont mean to, lol, WW and i have something in common, lol)

Ophelia Immortal

As i looked about and saw her lying there,
broken and beaten,
my love and my life,
tears streamed ever down past my face.

I held her and told her,
"My love,
my sweet,
dont die,
dont feel,
im broken with you gone,
im as dead without you here,
my love,
my sweet,
dont leave me here."

I looked into her eyes,
and saw the beauty of her love,
and thought back before,
in times when she tryed to teach me,
but was too ignorant to see.

In my bed I'd wake,
seeing her lying there,
wondering how id gotten so lucky,
to have this angel,
next to me.

Down from heaven she must have fallen,
like a seraph from the light,
ever gliding on to show,
what secrets she held i didnt know.

I held her to me,
i didnt let her go,
i wanted her melted up inside me,
so i could grasp her soul and pull it to me,
never letting go...

I asked her again,
"please dont die,
none of this is real,
if you should go just take me with you."

And then she lifted up her head,
and the beauty in her eyes shown like never before.
She opened up her mouth,
and out her words came to show.

That "Death is not real,
love is eternal,
death is not the end,
but in between the journey,
it's a gate way to the prettier land,
of souls and happiness,
and everlasting love.
Soon we do return,
to live and try again,
so never fear my amadeus,
oh childish one,
you know im with you always,
even if i seem to go."

Alas i saw as i held her in my arms,
that death is only the middle,
its just another place,
eventually we leave it,
and come back to live again.

I cryed on her,
i loved her,
for helping me understand,
this sweet goddess of love,
that i held within my arms.

And as she looked inside me seeing i understood,
i leant forward and kissed her,
with my everlasting love.
ALas she smiled,
told me she loved me,
and finally let go.

I no longer was sad,
i cryed tears of joy,
i would see her again,
my goddess of love,
Ophelia Immortal,
wise aove all,
a mere simple girl once,
who understood all.

[edit on 9-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

[edit on 11-6-2005 by asala]

posted on Jun, 9 2005 @ 12:51 PM
Another good poem!

your work is coming along very well

keep up the good work

[edit on 9-6-2005 by asala]

posted on Jun, 9 2005 @ 12:53 PM
WOW!!!!! THankyou! i swear your like a bullet!!! You just pop out of a hole everytime i post another poem!!!! HAHA, like a gophelion!!! lmao

THankyou asala!

posted on Jun, 9 2005 @ 04:38 PM
This one isnt quite as good as what ive been posting lately, but oh well, here it is. It needs a better ending....whatever....

Looking on the horizon,
viewing the setting sun,
wondering at it's majesty,
i begin to wonder what it is,
that makes people stray away,
and infest in worldy things.

Imagine a world without greed and hunger,
a world of peace and love,
an everlasting happiness,
filling the hearts of all.

No more tears,
No more mothers crying,
No more brothers dying,
Only peace across the land.

Listen for it now i do,
hoping it can come to us now,
Before the bombs explode,
before more people die,
stop the ignorance of hate,
let love conquer all.

Kisses of the rose of heart,
touch upon the leaders now.
Kiss them with wisdom,
mold their hearts to good.

Let the first ones step up,
drop their guns and grudges,
and look over the horizon,
looking to the east,
marvel at the sunset,
and find happiness.

Let us stop a while,
to look upon the sunset.
See the colors of it all,
sit a while just to think,
to ponder on our worldy things.

Is it really worth it?
Leaving this paradise,
keep the land clean,
let the earth grow.
It will heal the past sins,
stop all now,
see it's magnificence.
Just take a while,
and look around,
you have it all upon you,
just embrace it in your arms.

posted on Jun, 11 2005 @ 07:54 PM

posted on Jun, 13 2005 @ 09:46 AM
I jsut wrote this on accident....dont ask how..or why, i just wrote it in 2 seconds without even thinking of poems. cool....enjoy

River of life

Flowing with the river,
on a midnght summers eve,
let the lotus flow to you,
give the kiss of the rose of heart,
pain will leave you,
love will embody you,
down the river of life and love,
into lifes eternal goal,
union with god,
unknowable eternal,
lord of love.

[edit on 13-6-2005 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jun, 15 2005 @ 10:01 AM
Everyday is exactly the same for you,
waking, feeding, walking, sleeping,
Everyday plays out not so well,
life to you is a burden into hell.

You won't understand me,
even if you should try,
my loves and my life,
are nothing to your shame.

Why do you harm me,
with such brutality,
i never meant harm or bad,
i only wanted love as a child,
a thing you never could seem to give.

Well now i've grown,
and now i see,
the world for what it is,
i can live now,
yes i can even forgive.

And so i leave you,
to wallow in pain,
to strike those against you,
to misjudge and blame.

You can make your own choices,
you can keep this life,
but happiness,
you may find hard to claim.

posted on Jan, 2 2007 @ 11:36 PM
This is a song i just wrote in two minutes so i havent looked it over much. I plan on making it into an acoustic song, which if it come out well i may be able to post a link of for others to hear. I hope you like it.

Come on keep holding to this,
A vision to kiss,
In the midst of faith,
In a lie held dear,
Let your vision grow,
Let it rip thru your soul.

The Secret is alive,
It’s waiting to be found,
The Secret is abound,
It’s arriving now to make a sound,
The Secret is alive.

Breathe in and out,
Hold it down,
Now focus here,
And keep an image of your self.
(i may remove this, not sure it goes well)

Held convicted by your own,
Senseless registration to all you feel around.
That nudging you feel,
It’s not just a menace to you,
You can’t push it off for far too long,
It’ll crash in through your soul,
Grab a hold to the thought,
That sets you apart,
So let it out.

The Secret is alive,
It’s waiting to be found,
The Secret is abound,
It’s arriving to take us home,
The Secret is alive.

If you feel too weak it’s from your lack of faith,
Goodbye good friend,
You wouldn’t hold on,
You let the secret die.
And the vision awaits yet again,
With that morsel of hope,
To be found again.


[edit on 2-1-2007 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jan, 3 2007 @ 12:02 AM
This is an unfinished song i started with my band, called the Eclectic scene. Hope you like it.

He let it fall,
Thru the night and all,
He sat in his mess,
With just a bottle to hold.

Open the door,
You open the world,
A world little known,
With it’s mysteries to behold/beheld.

An eclectic Scene,
Where you may observe,
That the other side,
Doesn’t have to be green!

He picked up up his coat,
He reached for the knob,
Stepped into the dark,
To see what he’d find!


posted on Jan, 3 2007 @ 11:15 PM
Hello all, here is another song i just wrote. I hope you like it. Im still not sure on what to name it. Im looking for a name representing time, specifically 'looking for the right time', because this song deals with that. Any thoughts would be helpful.

Watch the point,
hold it forward,
grip it sharply,
now touch the morning dew to see.

Is the time right,
is it ready to be,
are they ready to fight,
crash and burn,
Destroy the sea.

Crash right through them,
lies and deceit,
holiness is hypocrisy.

It's falling,
to pieces.

It's only a matter of time,
before the rest comes down for good.


[edit on 3-1-2007 by Vesuvius 13]

posted on Jan, 11 2007 @ 03:42 PM
I'm not sure what to call this exactly, but for now it can be the above title. I wrote this today in composition class lol It's one of my recent favorites. This will be made into a song by guitar hopefully as well. It's kind of about me actually.

Wait! Take a Look around you,
At whats in front of you!
All i need is my guitar,
and all my Creativity,
To walk and learn,
about everything that sits round me,
and dive into the world!

I want to fall,
I want to fall,
into the depths of this abyss!
So i can learn what's often missed!
Create a brand new way ,
for myself and others,
to stay and play!

I want to Fall!
And escape out of my roots!
So i can finally know myself,
Don't pay attention to those folks,
what would they know,
about right and wrong,
when they've never felt,
whats thought as often Bad.

And now im falling more,
into a downward spiralling world,
But ill rise again,
with more wisdom to what's in front of me.
To bring the means to an end,
and find myself within.


posted on Jan, 15 2007 @ 08:15 PM
I just wrote this song while listening to nirvana. I'm not even sure what it means. It just came out of my head, and sound grunge rockish, prolly b/c i was listening to nirvana.

I've got Dirty Angel Wings for sale,
who wants to buy them?
Theyve been through hell and back,
I doubt they'll let you down.
Step up and take your bets,
the prize is worth your wastefulness.

Sign your soul over,
to my misdirections!
I waited long to loose my prowl,
It's in us all,
but now i have a hold,
a voice to kill.

In Fact now I think ill keep em,
i like my dirty angel wings,
it shows that even the best of us,
can lose what means the most.

Dont judge these wings,
theyre good to sell,
theyve been thru hell and back before.

Hey look i had dirty angel wings for sale.

yeah wierd huh? i like it.

posted on Jan, 15 2007 @ 08:22 PM
I also just wrote this song write after dirty angel wings and it turned into a song ive wanted to write for a long time, and i like it just how it is it's perfect. Hope you like it too, enjoy.

I'm gunna write a proposal to you!
i want you to leave this room!
Youve been here for far too long now!
I can see you wanna stay!
I'm sure maybe this will convince you!
Ashes! Ashes!
Your life is just as ember,
It's time to turn away from flames.

That's better now,
no need to fear,
but your only losing time,
It's time to head out on the road,
Youve got a long way to go!

I've got a proposal for you!
What the hell are you waiting For!?
I've got a proposal for you!
It's time to feel the cold!

Mmmmmm magnificent i can hear the song in my head.

[edit on 15-1-2007 by Vesuvius 13]

[edit on 16-1-2007 by Vesuvius 13]

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