haiku for fun

bang bang bang bang bang
Vesuvius is dead now
i'm just joking too

love and light my bum
the mister is a killer
proof of new age rage

(hehehehe)

I just completed
recording a masterpiece
I love you, Fender

I only shoot my mouth
or here shoot with my fingers
death I've never known

it is saturday
i am in the mood for fun
so I must now bounce

for those who don't know the rules of a haiku, it doesn't have to rhyme and usually consists of 3 lines and a 5-7-5 syllable rule for each line.

please keep in mind, Collaborative Fiction is not meant to be a place for point whores, this is not the red light district. Please treat this forum with respect as you would any piece of good literature or book. This forum is for serious writers, people wanting to improve their writing skills and share their creativity, not for three word stories, one liners and such.



[edit on 6-4-2005 by worldwatcher]

I'm not really a,
horrible little point whore,
it was just some fun!

So sorry, sorry,
I sure wont be bad no more,
please forgive me World!(watcher)

we can still have fun
just don't mess with my forum
points can still be earned

let's haiku away
haiku is poetry fun
let's haiku today

(for some reason, even when i don't try to, i end up rhyming )

Jerk the mod around

What a dunderhead move

Mod gets the last laugh.



Yeah, this haiku (bless you!) stuff can be fun!

Nice last line Crown, what a perfect rhyme!

Whats a dunderhead tho? lol
This thread is starting to sound like a rhyming musical or something. lol

The sky is blue now
But hours ago it was gray
Soon it will be dark.

Windows NT crashed.
I am the Blue Screen of Death.
No one hears your screams.

Friday I saw you
Yesterday you stole my heart
Today I drank beer

Karen's voice was great

But she starved herself to death

Now Richard hungers

The truth is out there
It is hiding in the trees
Burn not the forest



[edit on 6/7/2005 by lightseeker]

Eva is the best
Hottest in Maxxim's best list
My pants are now tight



Good luck to the ones
Running in the election
They will sure need it

Now I must be bored
As I'm writing these haikus
Heaven please help me

It is cold in here
I wish it was warmer now
must find thermostat

Originally posted by dbates
It is cold in here
I wish it was warmer now
must find thermostat

Its HOT in here
I wish it was cooler
Must find dbates Thermostat

Originally posted by Gazrok
Now I must be bored
As I'm writing these haikus
Heaven please help me

Gazrok!..ROFL


Heaven helps those who
Help themselves, bored is fine
Being dead is worse