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Topic started on
29-4-2005
@ 02:06 AM by
CPYKOmega
Searching the skies, space, and time
Seeking light, love, utopia
Through the gateways of the endless void
I find the meaning of life
My soul, on my conscious plane of existence
Endlessly seeking freedom from my biological carapace
Summoning the strength to journey inward, ceasing time
Blinding flash of white inner light opens my third eye
Seeking Nirvana, as it surely seeks I
Inner psyche escapes, breaking the universal code
Merging with the infinite cosmos
Beginning of the End Eternally
reply posted on 9-5-2005 @ 06:03 PM by
Vesuvius 13
Very interesting, nice poem.... I've been thinking of writing some poems on enlightenment as well! Very nice, congrats!
-Dani
reply posted on 11-5-2005 @ 07:55 AM by
Lenina
I like the subject.
The words were well chosen. The first stanza was my favorite. I thought the last two lacked some flow, but overall, it worked well.
reply posted on 19-5-2005 @ 06:49 AM by
infinite
excellent poem, i like it alot. I enjoyed reading it over and over again, excellent stuff
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