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Death by Fire [CT2020]

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posted on Aug, 20 2020 @ 08:51 AM
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It had been dark, but now there was the glow of campfire beside me. I could feel the warmth as it cooked the salty moisture from the sea breeze.

Suddenly, I was lifted into the air; my body squeezed by a force that seemed determined to reshape my body into some foreign configuration. Before I could react, there came a lightening bolt of pain as a wooden stake was rammed through my midsection, taking part of my guts with its tip. My skin crisping as I was held in the flames was my last moment.

I had loved being a marshmallow.

The End



posted on Aug, 20 2020 @ 10:01 AM
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Cute I didn’t see that coming

a reply to: Cameoii




posted on Aug, 20 2020 @ 09:22 PM
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a reply to: Cameoii

I love a story with a hook! Well done!




posted on Aug, 21 2020 @ 10:23 AM
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a reply to: argentus

Thanks! The last time you commented on one of my short stories it was for the same thing, the hook at the end. At least I'm consistent!




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