posted on Jun, 30 2020 @ 01:09 PM
Well I just loved that. Lots and lots of stuff crammed in, all the accusations about her mentioned at one time or another. Good stuff.
The meter though could have been much better. For instance, the line'' wreck of Hillary Rodham Clinton'' was just not suitable for that phrasing. Much
better would just have been '' the WRECK of HIllary Clinton. Rather than emphasising her whole name, the emphsis should have been on WRECK. There were
several places where to many words were crammed into to small a space. Other than that the overall project was very sweet.