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originally posted by: rickymouse
originally posted by: Stupidsecrets
a reply to: rickymouse
Begging you to write in paragraph format. I can't read it. And cut it down. Great for a book but doesn't work in this format.
I usually try to, but it's hard to do sometimes, breaking up a paragraph that should be together.
I think I will start leaving out some of the content on my posts and try to generalize things into laymans terms more so people can read less, most people do not need to know how things work in the body. I will try to cut the length of my posts in half at least so I do not screw up their eyes.
I'll try to make it easier in future posts, it is hard to fix that one but I can do better in the future. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
originally posted by: drussell41
originally posted by: rickymouse
originally posted by: Stupidsecrets
a reply to: rickymouse
Begging you to write in paragraph format. I can't read it. And cut it down. Great for a book but doesn't work in this format.
I usually try to, but it's hard to do sometimes, breaking up a paragraph that should be together.
I think I will start leaving out some of the content on my posts and try to generalize things into laymans terms more so people can read less, most people do not need to know how things work in the body. I will try to cut the length of my posts in half at least so I do not screw up their eyes.
I'll try to make it easier in future posts, it is hard to fix that one but I can do better in the future. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
I don't have any problem understanding your posts as written at all. Perhaps there's more of a problem with reading comprehension than your writing style. As far as I'm concerned, it's the detail content that make your posts.