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Lotto WL2019

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posted on Sep, 7 2019 @ 11:43 PM
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Lotto


Her screaming is driving me beyond that fevered edge, that sweat stain boundary between raw unrequited angst and controls loss.

Between her screams and those soulful moans, she pants.

Fast shallow panting much like Ginger after she was run down in the street and then as she lay there while the Vet administered that final shot. No Vaccine that time, or perhaps only inoculation against life.

Another long ululating cry renders submissive both thought and theory. It compels complicity. Complicit nature led to this moment, an event series shaped by emoting and it’s accompanying ennui.

Contortion claims her face, mocks her innocent beauty and shapes the very air with decibel and volume.

I would trade place with her if I could, but I could never protect her from this. Fate has it’s way with us all, and in it’s own time.

Only chaotic systems permit accident, to hell with order and symmetry. The only symmetry I claim, are the equal and perfect contours of her, the curvatures that snared sense and sensibility.

She’s panting again as I’m remembering, reminiscing, playing imagination movies on the inside of my clenched eyelids. All of our days are counted against a backdrop of expectation and realism. We enact scenes that have played always, and always somehow perceptually claimed as new, and terrifying.

Her screams this time are joined by another voice, a much higher octave wailing accompanies her cry.

So progressive, so sustaining, so dutiful.

The doctor raises our lotto win high and beaming states...”it’s a goy”.





YouSir
edit on 7-9-2019 by YouSir because: I so desired...

edit on 7-9-2019 by YouSir because: Durn copy paste...




posted on Sep, 8 2019 @ 03:52 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

Goy Veh, #surpriseending

Cheers



posted on Sep, 8 2019 @ 04:37 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

CONGRATULATIONS
shalom

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posted on Sep, 8 2019 @ 09:56 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

I Love This!

I have not forgotten Your Abilities as a Word Smith,
and This Has NOT Let Me Down!!

VERY Well Done!!!



posted on Sep, 8 2019 @ 01:18 PM
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Well written! A goy, Lol!



posted on Sep, 8 2019 @ 07:03 PM
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a reply to: YouSir

I really enjoy the way you wordsmith.

Thanks for writing it so I could read it.



ETA... your writing style is eclectic and somewhat profound to me. As a prolific reader I've never really run across what you do with words.

Reading one of your stories is what emboldened me to jump into writing on ATS.

Please keep writing.


edit on 8-9-2019 by Lumenari because: (no reason given)



posted on Sep, 9 2019 @ 08:17 PM
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a reply to: F2d5thCavv2


Ummm...









YouSir
edit on 9-9-2019 by YouSir because: I’m the boss...



posted on Sep, 9 2019 @ 08:23 PM
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a reply to: radarloveguy


Ummm...thanks man...







YouSir



posted on Sep, 9 2019 @ 08:33 PM
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Ummm...hey Syx...it’s good to hear from you again my friend...been thinking about you lately...and here you are...

Glad you liked my little story...







YouSir



posted on Sep, 9 2019 @ 08:40 PM
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Ummm...hey light Star...thank you for your kind words...







YouSir



posted on Sep, 9 2019 @ 09:17 PM
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Ummm...hello Lumenari...thank you for your consideration...








YouSir



posted on Sep, 10 2019 @ 11:30 PM
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Nicely done.

I have to ask - the last line...Typo or intent? Not that it matters. It works well either way.



posted on Sep, 11 2019 @ 09:14 AM
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originally posted by: Vroomfondel
Nicely done.

I have to ask - the last line...Typo or intent? Not that it matters. It works well either way.



Ummm...hello Vroom...that was intentional...

Last week there was a report that some Dem bonehead thought it was a stellar idea to combat anthropogenic global warming and control populations by eating each other...cannibalism for school lunches as it were...

I simply took that to it’s illogical conclusion that in their dystopic version of skewed reality...there would be lotteries held for allowing a baby to survive post birth abortion...

Not only that...with the raging gender dysmorphia...it only seemed fitting to honor inclusivity by allowing only hermaphrodites...or “goys”

But then...I suppose goy for goyim works equally well as a couple posters suggested...

Thank you for enjoying my contribution...







YouSir



posted on Sep, 16 2019 @ 01:37 AM
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a reply to: YouSir

A future marcher in goy pride parades!

S + F



posted on Sep, 16 2019 @ 11:26 AM
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a reply to: DictionaryOfExcuses


Ummm...thank you my friend...







YouSir







 
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