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Flawless Eraser

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posted on May, 3 2019 @ 06:10 PM
I heard it takes two to tango girl
A Stranglehold on lips so loose
Its Best to not hold on
To soon to sit in wait for saving
Picturing a perfect escape
As tooth and dagger
Sinks in flesh so sweet
lost in commotion
Dancing on the street
Your masters.calling
Your phone's on fire
A Flawless eraser
A way to say goodbye

Are we free to lose our minds
As we pay for a replacement
Winding me up
she calls it electric
While missing the point
We find our direction

posted on May, 3 2019 @ 06:47 PM
i liked this, very poetic. Keep writing i would love to hear more from you.

posted on May, 3 2019 @ 09:04 PM
a reply to: Firebrand1105volunteer

Why thank you firebrand! I truly appreciate.
I'll see what I can do to keep the content coming

posted on May, 3 2019 @ 09:39 PM
a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

Quite a read

A lot there

From the mating habits of black widow spiders
"Picturing a perfect escape" quite a rush for the male after the deed.
or "As tooth and dagger Sinks in flesh so sweet" he throws himself on fangs and thus prolongs the deed then dies.

"A Flawless eraser A way to say goodbye" or deleting text messages from a phone? or erasing wrinkles with cream or even trimming away stray facial hair.

Wind up coil spring generator powered replacement brain?

posted on May, 6 2019 @ 09:20 AM
a reply to: pthena

To be honest I didn't even think of the black widow aspect.
I must admit it ties in quite nicely.
I have always been fascinated by spiders!
You are spot on with my intended theme.

Thank you for for the input pthena!

posted on Jan, 11 2020 @ 12:35 AM
I just rewrote this one recently. I really like the way it shaped up

Girl it takes two to tango
A stranglehold on lips so loose
It's best for you to not hold on
Or sit around in wait for saving
Hate to love this provocation
It's picture perfects new escape
His cracked teeth speak like daggers
Sinking into flesh so sweet
So lost in a commotion
We're dancing in the street
Listen to your master call
The dialtones a phone on fire
Disappear my dear my flawless eraser
It's quite the way to say goodbye

We're all free to lose our minds
As If we'd pay for a replacement
Do not ask why
My tounge is tied
As if the answer was impressive
Skipping past the missing points
In search of new direction.

So disappear again my dear
My flawless eraser..

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