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Accusations unspoken. [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 17 2019 @ 08:49 PM
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-Who? Me? What? No baby!
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-No baby! Never! No way! Not me!
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-Baby don't! No! No! Noooooooooooooooooooooooo...




The end.
'Writer' status.




posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 12:29 AM
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a reply to: Nothin

Did I miss sumthin ?



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 12:29 AM
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dp
edit on 18-4-2019 by Justso because: (no reason given)



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 04:41 AM
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originally posted by: Justso
a reply to: Nothin

Did I miss sumthin ?


Perhaps a reply. To me this writing, albeit short and to the point, allows the reader to ponder, WTF happened here.

I imagine the speaker was tied down then smothered. Cut short, couldn't breath afterwards. I guess the thrill of the kill came to the person sitting and smothering.

My thoughts,

bally



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 08:48 AM
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originally posted by: Justso
a reply to: Nothin

Did I miss sumthin ?


You ain't missin sumthin, if you gots Nothin! (Ha-ha, Just kidding).

The piece is an entry, into a creative-writing contest, with a word restriction of maximum 50 words.
Here's a link to the entry page. Contest closes today though! Please join-in the fun.
SHORT STORY WRITERS CONTEST for April 2019 - "SNEAKING SUSPICIONS" [SS2019]



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 09:20 AM
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a reply to: bally001

Hi Bally. Thanks for your message, and for sharing your interpretation.

The title, format, and style were all planned-out and written-down, a couple of days after the contest opened.
Was thinking about using up to 50 words, but they just never came to me.
Was thinking about creating the half-story, with those 50, but the more the idea of unspoken accusations was pondered, the more it seemed interesting to also not give them away in the written words.

Wanted to use some fancy-dancy, highfalutin, writer's words: but they just didn't feel right.
Finally: the simple raw words, seemed to be more realistic, so just went with those.
Seems to me that every reader, becomes a co-creator, and fills-in the blanks in their own way.
Always loved art where the observer, becomes a part of the art.



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 09:24 AM
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a reply to: Nothin

Definitely a nefarious and deadly ending. You are right...anything other than The End would have corrupted the imagination created.



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 09:39 AM
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a reply to: CynConcepts

Ha-ha, good point!
Thanks Cyn!



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 08:36 PM
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a reply to: Nothin

Well done. This is a very suspicious story that I think could end up as a thriller.




posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 08:41 PM
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Words understood only between those that are speaking them.

Still getting on your knees now?



Why can't you ease your worried mind by yourself? Defective?



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 09:33 PM
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a reply to: Nothin

Well that was quite a one sided presentation.

A deaf person holding up a flip book of accusatory memes perhaps?



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 09:55 PM
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a reply to: highvein

Thanks HV. Very suspicious indeed.... LoL.



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 10:51 PM
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originally posted by: InTheLight
Words understood only between those that are speaking them.

Words unspoken: understood through...?


Still getting on your knees now?

Who? Me? What? No baby!


Why can't you ease your worried mind by yourself?

No baby! Never! No way! Not me!


Defective?

Baby don't! No! No! Noooooooooooooooooooooooo...




posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 10:58 PM
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originally posted by: pthena
a reply to: Nothin

Well that was quite a one sided presentation.

A deaf person holding up a flip book of accusatory memes perhaps?


Hi Pthena. Thanks!

Perhaps...
Perhaps a series of memes, depicting a deaf person, holding a candlestick, in the Library... ?



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 11:10 PM
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posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 11:18 PM
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originally posted by: Nothin
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-Who? Me? What? No baby!
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-No baby! Never! No way! Not me!
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-Baby don't! No! No! Noooooooooooooooooooooooo...




The end.
'Writer' status.




Yeah, you!! S&F

Gordi asks what we can do about S&F from ATS people voting for their friends, well, the best rise to the surface no matter what.


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edit on 14CDT11America/Chicago022111130 by InTheLight because: (no reason given)



posted on Apr, 18 2019 @ 11:47 PM
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originally posted by: InTheLight

originally posted by: Nothin
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-Who? Me? What? No baby!
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-No baby! Never! No way! Not me!
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-Baby don't! No! No! Noooooooooooooooooooooooo...




The end.
'Writer' status.




Yeah, you!! S&F

Gordi asks what we can do about S&F from ATS people voting for their friends, well, the best rise to the surface no matter what.


Thanks ITL!




edit on 19-4-2019 by Nothin because: sp



posted on Apr, 19 2019 @ 12:07 AM
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Collaborative Writing?

Wow. 43 days since anyone posted there.



posted on Apr, 19 2019 @ 12:12 AM
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a reply to: pthena

A resuscitation? A resurrection?



posted on Apr, 19 2019 @ 12:24 AM
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a reply to: Nothin

I wasn't volunteering; more like nominating.




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