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Cranked Kite SS2019

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posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 05:39 AM
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Up on high on the edge of sky,
The devils fly.
A glint off metal, alloy grey.

With violence hardwired,
Relentless cold logic.
Perception. Depth. Mission. File.
All seeing is the eye of the true psychotic.

A solitary sniper,
A hunter without honor.
And this masterpiece won't stop,
Once it knows your name.




posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 06:44 AM
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a reply to: BlackIbanez

Great! Read into that. Hope my thoughts are with your story/poem.

Well done.

bally



posted on Apr, 9 2019 @ 04:45 AM
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originally posted by: bally001
a reply to: BlackIbanez
Ss
Great! Read into that. Hope my thoughts are with your story/poem.

Well done.

bally

Thanks. I'm not much of a writer, this is taken from a song I wrote awhile ago.
It's basically me being torn between the fascination I have with stealth drone/jet tech and my horror at what they're created to do.
Actually I'd be interested to hear what your thoughts about what you read into it?

edit on 9-4-2019 by BlackIbanez because: (no reason given)



posted on Apr, 9 2019 @ 05:19 AM
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originally posted by: BlackIbanez

originally posted by: bally001
a reply to: BlackIbanez
Ss
Great! Read into that. Hope my thoughts are with your story/poem.

Well done.

bally

Thanks. I'm not much of a writer, this is taken from a song I wrote awhile ago.
It's basically me being torn between the fascination I have with stealth drone/jet tech and my horror at what they're created to do.
Actually I'd be interested to hear what your thoughts about what you read into it?


That was a good read. Wrote something myself a while back. The original is a bit longer, played it on guitar when I could. Basically -

Air to ground is your intention,
Air to ground is your obliteration.
Of below,
the targeted foe.
You really don't care,
You're from the air.

You're a Hellfire Missile
Primed for dismissal
Intent on destruction of the target,
Another poor soul.

Written by bally
So yes, probably that's what clicked (thoughts - "I know this")

Kind regards

bally

edit on 9-4-2019 by bally001 because: clarification entry



posted on Apr, 9 2019 @ 07:37 PM
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Actually I'd be interested to hear what your thoughts about what you read into it?

Now that you've given your meaning, no worry of spoiler.

I totally pictured a sniper on a hilltop overlooking a college campus.

"Once it knows your name."
Anonymity is an illusory armor because:
"All seeing is the eye of the true psychotic."
Once the "true name" is assigned to the target of opportunity
by the psychotic, there is no one to contradict him.

see also: University of Texas tower shooting, 1966.




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