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The Attic Door [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 11:37 PM
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Jerry watched the attic door intently. He knew something was in there. This was his second night here and he had the sinking suspicion that he was not alone. He kept hearing noises. The door banged open. Jerry screamed.

Detective Tanner stood over the corpse. He knew he wasn’t alone.
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posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 01:59 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Good one Skiddy!




posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 06:39 AM
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a reply to: Night Star
Thanks. I somehow managed to top it off right at 50 words. It was close lol.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 07:06 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Beauty SM. Sounds like an intro for "True Detective Stories". You should write.

Well done.

bally

edit on 8-4-2019 by bally001 because: Just added. Great 50 words or less



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 07:09 AM
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a reply to: bally001

Thanks. It was inspired by stories about homeowners who find people living in their attics or crawlspaces.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 07:19 AM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

Wow! I know what you're talking about there. Went to some calls many (many) years ago. Will never forget one creep bursting out of a wardrobe. Scared the crap outta me. Another one was hiding in the roof and some idiot lived under a house. (all homeless of course).

bally



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 08:53 AM
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a reply to: bally001

That's really creepy. I think there was a Gary Busey movie where his character lived in a secret attic room.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 08:55 AM
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originally posted by: Skid Mark
Thanks. It was inspired by stories about homeowners who find people living in their attics or crawlspaces.


I call those 'hostages'.

Nice job BTW.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 12:28 PM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.




I call those 'hostages'.


I thought you called that Sunday dinner.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 12:55 PM
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originally posted by: Skid Mark
I thought you called that Sunday dinner.


Egg-chicken, chicken-egg.



posted on Apr, 8 2019 @ 09:16 PM
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a reply to: AugustusMasonicus



Egg-chicken, chicken-egg.

Date, "prisoner".




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