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Invaded[SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 12:34 PM
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Creeping insidiously
With threats, unspoken,
Of violence and malice
Aforethought.
Nothing holds my trust:
Even the most innocent thing
Liable to be twisted out of context
Made to fit the demented script
That runs constantly in the space between
My mind and my will;
Supplanting, by insistence, my very sanity.




posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 04:27 PM
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Really like this



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 04:42 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Another good one!




posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 12:43 AM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Wow...
Your phrasing is perfect...
I really like it
I gotta read some more of your writing brb



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 02:28 AM
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thanks elgaz, Star. Whered ya go, Super? hope ya didnt get lost



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 02:28 AM
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thanks elgaz, Star. Whered ya go, Super? hope ya didnt get lost



posted on Apr, 11 2019 @ 09:02 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Sorry mate busy week. I'm still here



posted on Apr, 13 2019 @ 09:37 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Loved it.

It should be a rap song... lol

The cadence just really worked out.




edit on 13-4-2019 by Lumenari because: (no reason given)



posted on Apr, 17 2019 @ 01:27 PM
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a reply to: Lumenari

Lol, glad you liked it. I tried reading it as a rap song but couldn't get it xD



posted on Apr, 17 2019 @ 04:45 PM
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a reply to: LucidWarrior

Free form of course... don't match the cadence to the beat.




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