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Semblance [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 08:44 AM
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Whispers when I pass. Eyes darting away. Constructs filling voids that I can never see. Fate never showing its hand, but always grasping. The foresense that reality is a veil, both everything and nothing. The only question - am I looking out of the rabbit hole …….. or looking in?

THE END.




posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 08:51 AM
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a reply to: elgaz

3 sentence stories are not very interesting.



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 08:59 AM
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a reply to: dfnj2015

The rules as are fifty words or less.
You give it a try Shakespalien



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 09:04 AM
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a reply to: dfnj2015

It's a 50-word short story competition, hence the SS2019 in the title.

www.abovetopsecret.com...

Thanks for the positivity.



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 09:30 AM
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a reply to: elgaz

Very nicely done.

(And don't mind grumpy britches.)



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 10:08 AM
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a reply to: elgaz

I really liked this! Nice take on the theme.




posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 10:22 AM
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Thank you both.



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 01:21 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

By far my favorite entry.



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 04:56 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

Wonderful!




posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 10:21 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

Now that reads like an ATS story!



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 12:52 AM
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a reply to: elgaz

Noice!



posted on Apr, 11 2019 @ 09:04 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

A good question. One I ask myself quite often
Nicely written



posted on Apr, 12 2019 @ 03:32 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

Nice , I also don't see it coming, not even know where to stand sometimes when it is there?



posted on Apr, 12 2019 @ 03:32 PM
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posted on Apr, 12 2019 @ 07:52 PM
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a reply to: elgaz

Loved this!

Thank you for writing it... it made me ponder things for a bit.

As every good bit of writing should.




posted on Apr, 15 2019 @ 08:57 AM
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Thank you for your comments.



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