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Never trust the wiring - SS2019

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posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 07:39 AM
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Though my life has always been vibrant and my experiences vivid.... I've always asked myself is this real.

All those I love drive me, our memories define me.

On my Daughter's wedding day a bright flash.

The wrong life flashed before my eyes, must have been the wreck.

The End.


edit on 4-4-2019 by CriticalStinker because: Added The End.




posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 10:11 AM
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a reply to: CriticalStinker

Very cool.

I really liked this idea. Well done!



posted on Apr, 4 2019 @ 10:18 AM
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originally posted by: zosimov
a reply to: CriticalStinker

Very cool.

I really liked this idea. Well done!


Thank you kindly
, I liked your's as well.

I love this contests theme, dark typically gets more of a response in writing. I suppose we read to feel.



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 12:50 AM
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a reply to: CriticalStinker

I have to agree.
I've been waiting for a theme that struck me.
This seemed like the one.

Your story made me sad (in a good way)
Not sure how you did that ....
Well done!



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 06:45 AM
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a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE

Thank you so much!

Since the topic was paranoia, I wanted to take a different approach... Usually the idea of paranoia is someone is out to get you, or it's suspicion of nothing.



posted on Apr, 11 2019 @ 09:07 PM
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a reply to: CriticalStinker

I would rather have suspicion of nothing and look like a fool.

Good point you bring up.
Never really thought of it like that



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