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Invasion [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 2 2019 @ 10:44 AM
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I didn’t leave the window open when I left. Weird… What happened to my laptop!? Hello? Anyone? Why are there clothes all over the floor...? What are those banging noises? Oh god… The chairs are out of place. Papers on the floor. Who’s there?! Scared…. Oh! Cleaning day I see!

THE END




posted on Apr, 2 2019 @ 10:29 PM
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a reply to: chris_stibrany

I like stream of consciousness writing so to me that was a fun read.

Thanks for sharing!




posted on Apr, 3 2019 @ 04:12 AM
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a reply to: chris_stibrany


That constitutes a "happy ending"



posted on Apr, 3 2019 @ 10:46 AM
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a reply to: SprocketUK


i think so too
but i liked the idea of building up suspense per the competition and then deflating it in a surprise.



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 04:40 PM
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thank you; when I write it is often stream of consciousness. If it is a longer piece I will have a plot mapped out roughly but then just let it rip as if i am living in it.
it seems to work okay, but not if i want a quality ending :-/

a reply to: Lumenari




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