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Contents of a Dead Man's Stomach [SS2019]

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posted on Apr, 1 2019 @ 09:46 AM
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Writing to remember
will eat later
walls red now
blue last time awake
broth salty
yesterday thick and sweet
they're coming
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"Again Doctor?"

"Yes, toxin scan shows cadmium poisoning."

"Have Zyltol remove writing tablets from all rooms;
Substitute primitive pencil and paper.
Doctor do we frighten them that much?"

- the end -




posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 01:10 AM
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a reply to: pthena

I love the change in point of view.
Had to read it a couple times to understand.
Suspenseful to say the least!

Who was he?
What happened to him?
Who are They!?!?!?!?!
Doctors always creeped me out...



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 10:56 AM
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a reply to: SupermassiveBlackHOLE


Who was he?

I guess, since this looks to not be this months winner, I shall dare to offer a spoiler.

I should have spent a bit more time on this story.

Substitute ( bellboy ) for ( Zyltol ).
Change ( primitive pencil and paper ) to ( last season's paper stationary ).
Change (Doctor do we frighten them that much ) to ( Your patients were to enjoy their vacation )

Cadmium is one of the toxic substances found on circuit boards.

edit on 5-4-2019 by pthena because: (no reason given)



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 04:41 PM
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super good!
a reply to: pthena



posted on Apr, 5 2019 @ 04:44 PM
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a reply to: chris_stibrany

Thank you.




 
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