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Don't Turn On The Light's




Topic started on 6-7-2003 @ 01:49 PM by blackwidow666


Two college girls named Cindy and Mary shared a dorm room together. one night Mary told cindy she had a mild case of the flu and felt pretty lousy, and wanted to be left alone. Cindy was sympathetic and took her books to the library to study so Mary could have the room to herself.

Later that evening, Cindy met her boyfriend who wanted to take her to a bar. But she remembered she had left her ID back in the dorm and would need to get it to prove she was old enough to get into the bar. Remembering that Mary was sick and not wanting to disturb her, Cindy didnt turn on the ligts when she went into the room. She just walked in, fumbled on the dresser for the card and left.

Cindy had a good time at the bar with the boy. At midnight he drove her back to the dorm. Police cars were everywhere. Frightened college students huddled in shivering groups. Yellow crime-scene tape was blocking the door to the one dorm rooms. Cindy panicled, screamed that the room was hers, and pushed past detectives to get inside.

Mary's mutilated, dismembered body was on her bed in a lake of blood. She had been stabbed repeatedly and hacked to piece's. sickened by the sight, Cindy ran into the bathroom and vomited. After she emptied her stomach, she went to the sink to wash her face.

Scrawled on the mirror in blood was a message from the killer written just for her:

ARN'T YOU GLAD YOU DIDN'T TURN ON THE LIGHT'S?

[Edited on 16-7-2003 by blackwidow666]



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reply posted on 6-7-2003 @ 01:51 PM by darkhowling


Ha! Outstanding. Very creepy, good job playing on people's fears.



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reply posted on 6-7-2003 @ 01:57 PM by dragonrider


Wow! Creepy as hell, but believable! Thanks for the story, that was very scary!



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reply posted on 6-7-2003 @ 02:06 PM by Osobad28


I have heard that one b4...one of my favorites!



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reply posted on 6-7-2003 @ 02:09 PM by blackwidow666


OSOBAD 28

well if you liked that, which is 1 i do like the best here's another, you might know?

blackwidow

[Edited on 6-7-2003 by blackwidow666]



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reply posted on 6-7-2003 @ 03:51 PM by Ocelot


Damn Thats a pretty good scary story.



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