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The River [LIF2018]

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posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 07:44 AM
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Floating down the river. Peaceful, water like glass. Wonder and excitement. Twists and turns lead to turbulent rapids. Calm again. A beautiful mountain view. Thrown down a waterfall. Passengers come and go. The hull splinters. Slowly water leaks in. One last starry nights beauty. Sink. Quite now. Black. That's life.

The End.




posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 10:37 AM
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a reply to: FauxMulder

Great read-- very well done. I love your description of each stage of life.


FM!
edit on 4-12-2018 by zosimov because: add smiley



posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 02:34 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Thanks zos! It's hard to put any type of meaning in just 50 words.



posted on Dec, 5 2018 @ 02:22 AM
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a reply to: FauxMulder

I almost feel this piece is too good for fifty words.
Though the one -two punch has A nice feel to it.




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