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Brahma's Tear LIF2018

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posted on Dec, 2 2018 @ 01:47 PM
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A thought verdant and profound with a pang welled up in Brahma’s eye, and when the brim could no longer hold rolled slowly, gracefully down his sculpted cheek. Within that fecund tear, everything-- the universe, galaxies, celestial and terrestrial bodies, and the fates of all creatures great and small. Splash.

The End.


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posted on Dec, 2 2018 @ 02:32 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Beautiful and sad Zos! I imagine the Gods are crying sometimes...

Thank you!




posted on Dec, 2 2018 @ 03:07 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thank you TNM!

I loved your story when I read it (yesterday?) and your comments really hit home also-- about to go put my vote in and respond.


Hope you're having a wonderful day!
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posted on Dec, 2 2018 @ 03:11 PM
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Man, some people have talent around here and you're one of them. I need to step up my game



posted on Dec, 2 2018 @ 03:13 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

It's a beautiful expression of the wonder of life.



posted on Dec, 4 2018 @ 02:24 PM
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Nicely done expression.




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