I am Free

I love the life...

That I live
I'm aware of the peace

That's before me
I can't see the path

That you see
But it's ok.

I want to run
Towards my destiny

But I fall
upon the rocks

The wind in my hair
Lifts me higher

I can see
Beyond my pe·riph·er·al

And i'm floating,
On a cloud of love

I run towards my
Destination

I am free

I am free...

a reply to: LadyButterfly



That was neat I had the Who song playing in my head as I read that.

a reply to: SprocketUK

Oh that's awesome, I just wrote that five minutes ago. I love your commentary Sprocket thank you!!

a reply to: LadyButterfly

It is good to see something uplifting on ATS.

Thanks. There is hope, in that we can hope.

a reply to: LadyButterfly


still time to enter this month's story comp

a reply to: SprocketUK

Oh i don't think i'd win I came in too late. Perhaps the next one will do. Thank you I will stand by and keep an eye out for the next contest.

a reply to: chr0naut

Thank you so much!

a reply to: LadyButterfly

I liked that

a reply to: AthlonSavage

Thank you, I needed to hear some positive feedback. It's been a long time.

a reply to: LadyButterfly

You got my vote for the best short story of year.

originally posted by: LadyButterfly
a reply to: SprocketUK

Oh i don't think i'd win I came in too late. Perhaps the next one will do. Thank you I will stand by and keep an eye out for the next contest.

If it was just about winning, I would never have entered any of them