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Smooth Criminal TCD2018 non writer

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posted on Aug, 12 2018 @ 03:05 PM
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Andy knew his life was about to end. He had nothing to lose but his dignity anyways. His life long venture of stolen cars, stolen goods and stolen hearts was coming to an end for him. He always lied and cheated his way through life and always seemed to come out on top until now. Once he was known as lucky Andy, but now he was known only as Andy the creep. Creep because he took advantage of everyone he ever knew and lied harder than a diamond edged blade.

The gang showed up like a feature matinee ready to rumble. This made Andy nervous and he contemplated running but his feet froze to the pavement making it impossible for him to move.

What do you people want he yelled. A guy in leather chaps yelled back, we want you in tiny pieces!

This didnt look good to him at all. Fear overtook and he cowered before them. I'm sorry he cried. I cheated your sister, I stole from you and I tried to damage the engine on your 64 Fargo. The weeping was beyond normal, it was pathetic. The head biker walked up and pushed Andy over with one finger in dismay. I can't fight you man, fighting you would be like wrestling a 12 year old girl.They shook their heads and walked away never really knowing that Andy was far from youth in fact, a 34 year old sorry excuse of a man.

The moral here is, don't fake it till you make it.


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edit on 12-8-2018 by PillarOfFire because: (no reason given)

edit on 12-8-2018 by PillarOfFire because: (no reason given)




posted on Aug, 12 2018 @ 03:16 PM
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a reply to: PillarOfFire


To the point!




posted on Aug, 12 2018 @ 03:19 PM
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a reply to: DBCowboy

Thank you Sir



posted on Aug, 12 2018 @ 03:34 PM
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a reply to: PillarOfFire

The coward survives: a fate tenfold worse than death. Liked it!




posted on Aug, 12 2018 @ 04:54 PM
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a reply to: PillarOfFire

Cool. As DB said, To the point.

Liked it. Short but a meaningful story.

Good work.

My regards,

Bally



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 09:40 AM
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originally posted by: DictionaryOfExcuses
a reply to: PillarOfFire

The coward survives: a fate tenfold worse than death. Liked it!



Yeah it seemed the only thing to do with the sissy guy was let him go, bah.

Thanks man!



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 11:08 AM
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a reply to: bally001

Thanks bally yours was good too, nice one!



posted on Aug, 14 2018 @ 05:29 AM
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a reply to: PillarOfFire


Nice twist, no one died. Good work.



posted on Aug, 14 2018 @ 08:10 AM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

I think that skitz came back from the last one but never learned his lesson. Thanks man!




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