I'm of the school of thought that there is no good writing, only good rewriting. I read somewhere that Pappa Hemmingway himself said his words didn't begin to sing until his 11th rewrite.
When you have as little natural talent as I do, words like that tend to ring a bell
Than again, I'm sure that there are some natural wordsmiths out there that don't need to rewrite, just as there are natural piano players or natural ball players. I wish I were one of them. Anyway,
Good start. Where are you going to take it from here?
Wupy

