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[TL2018] Eternal love

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posted on May, 8 2018 @ 08:56 PM
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If you like to hear music while you read this I recommend this:


Yesterday, I was watching the vivid blooming Oleander bushes, that you always cared so much about. Seeing how the wind drifts through the branches and leaves, reminds me about the time when we were allowed to be together on this journey.

Memories that slowly seem to fade, just like the leaves during fall, as each year passes by without you. While I observe the first petals gently floating to the ground, I see you joyfully dancing barefoot in the summer-rain when we were still sixteen.

I'm getting older and frail, just like the bark on the Oleander, that you planted the day when dark clouds descended over your life. A scream of defiance against the cruel truth.

It was this moment where I couldn't help thinking that you planted those bushes, because you knew you had to go so soon. I love you so much. I hope we meet again in our next life, but before then, I keep you in my heart till THE END.



edit on 8-5-2018 by verschickter because: forgot the music and the photo




posted on May, 8 2018 @ 09:40 PM
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a reply to: verschickter

Almost brought a tear to my eye...almost...cough. Harrumph. Throat clearing cough...



posted on May, 8 2018 @ 10:15 PM
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a reply to: verschickter

Oof.


Hits you right in the feels. Nice work.



posted on May, 9 2018 @ 07:54 AM
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That was both beautifully written and heartrending.
Awesome writing.



posted on May, 9 2018 @ 10:42 AM
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Thank you all for the kind words


I hope this inspires other members to come forward and join this contest. So if you read this (yeah, you!) why not give it a try? There is nothing to loose but everything to gain. There will be no loosers, only winners of different kind.




posted on May, 9 2018 @ 01:20 PM
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a reply to: verschickter

I like what you wrote a lot, thank you for sharing it.



posted on May, 25 2018 @ 07:29 AM
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Heck yeah. Lush and haunting, verschickter. Wow.



posted on Jun, 4 2018 @ 12:28 PM
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Thanks everyone

Maybe I could inspire some others to join the next contest?



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