Also is your voice supposed to be just out of earshot I can hardly understand much of it?.
Needed a more original story also maybe about flying cats or something you need to hold the listener with your voice also.
You could become British and have the best reading voice on earth (like my own) but alas I feel it is too late.
edit on 2-4-2018 by
testingtesting because: (no reason given)
For what it's worth it wasn't that bad, it's just not what I'm into (genre as well as lyrics). I think you'd actually sound decent if you were a bit
more aggressive in your delivery, a bit louder with passion. Some parts it sounded like you were reading, but you could work on that. I dunno if
you're quiet because of neighbours, confidence or just never tried it. Try doing the same thing again next time you're p*ssed, it might be good.
Thank you a lot. I use to write thousands of rhymes & freestyle all day, everyday aloud. My confidence went down when I stopped finishing fists people
threw & started living for god a couple few years ago. It coming back, that is why I am putting my quickies online now.
P.S never recorded that's why it's not intertwined properly. Well a few times but barely any
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