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The Haiku Kaiju

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posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 02:05 AM
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Who doesn't like reading something short and sweet?

Post a 5-7-5 syllable haiku if you have any.

Justified water
of the Crimea river
by the timber lake




posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 02:16 AM
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edit on 23-3-2018 by Psilocyborg because: No sir, I dont like it.



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 05:00 AM
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Lol, are you Russian? Is the timber lake a real place? Why would it be called timber? What is the relationship? Does it have meaning to you beyond being a causla pleasant verbal image?

Meaning of slaughter
Will that ever bring order
Upon any state?

Put the two together:


Justified water
of the Crimea river
by the timber lake

Meaning of slaughter
Will that ever bring order
Upon any state?




edit on 23-3-2018 by Revolution9 because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 05:48 AM
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a reply to: Revolution9

Peace or Disorder
Chaos above and beneath,
Lead us to Slaughter



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 08:10 AM
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My very first haiku
It's not brilliant but will do
Torture and pain ensue

Maybe a second

A mistral scuds above
The sky clear crisp fresh and blue
A daisy petal falls



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 08:50 AM
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I like eggs and toast.
Toast makes me very happy.
I'd like some coffee.



Check please!!



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 09:14 AM
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The world is broken
Why can't people see that truth
Time we should be free



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 09:23 AM
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posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 11:57 AM
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Partial Disability Haiku

can't work overtime
I've only got one can of
beans at home - one can



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 12:29 PM
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Drank nothing today
I think I am going mad
sobriety sucks.

My liver will die
but not if I can help it
if I can help it.

so I drank coffee
it was with some turmeric
it was very nice!

now today is gone
and tomorrow begins new
oh I hate weekends...

days of being bored
for two days it will be done
then again it starts...

a week of boredom
trying to remain sober
kill me now will you?

dont, that was a joke
I prefer to live longer
hence I didn't drink.

edit on 23-3-2018 by badw0lf because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 07:23 PM
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a reply to: Revolution9

lol. My haiku was a reference to Justin Timberlakes song, cry me a river from his album Justified.



posted on Mar, 23 2018 @ 08:48 PM
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Titties and cold beer
These are the good things in life
Steak is on the grill



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