My 2 Latest Verses... Still Undecided On An Instrumental. (HipHop)

a reply to: Hazardous1408

Well, Haz, for better or for worse, I made the thread.

I'm sorry- shoulda let you take it, I'm dreadfully aware that not everyone can rap lol but hey it is all in good fun I guess.

I hope you're having a great night. (I enjoyed all those new verses you threw out there.)

This line just hit hard. All it takes is one lie, you are right.

Look, NASA Doesn’t Always Lie...
And I’d Never Claim They Do...
But We Only Need One To Know...
The Motives They Present...
Just Ain’t The Truth...

If Nothing Has Been Found...
There’d Be No Need To Be Misleading...
That’s All We Need To Understand...
And Seeing Is Believing...

a reply to: zosimov

Kids got fire,

there is a lot of quality in this thread. I hope he keeps adding to it, it's like storing your work to the cloud.. anywhere you go you can now pull up ats and look at your work, that is an awesome resource for a mobile depository.



Respectfully,
~ meathead

Thanks guys, you’re amazing.

It’s very likely I will continue in this thread, as I always use my Notes App on my phone to write, but for about 7 months now I am unable to back it up due to storage or data shortage etc...
I have way too many (hundreds) important verses to risk a random crash and losing them all.

So for now, ATS and FB are my notepads for new material, as well as taking time to transfer older verses to a safer location.


The support here has been fantastic, much love people!

This Is The Pinnacle, Top Of The Range Tech...
It’s Not A Faulty Data Instrument...
It’s Why There’s Still No Legit Conclusion...
Explaining The Vela Incident...

The Investigation Concluded...
No Radiation Detected...
But Hey... Who Really Knows...
The Way Some Nation’s Protected...

It’s Not Wise To Expose Or Piss Off...
A Rogue Nuclear State...
Cos Any Potential MAD Exchange?...
There’s No Doomier Fate...

So Nothings Said Or Done...
To Those Who Won’t Sign The Treaty Pact...
But It’s Not Worth The Risk It Poses...
So I Suppose I’d Agree With That...

We Know The Government’s Corrupt...
It’s The Main Profession Of So Many Liars...
But I’ve Been Hearing A Lot Suspect Things...
Of Laser Weapons And The Cali Fires...

Zos, sorry my friend, I’ve had your battle thread in my tabs since you posted it, and I promise I will definitely pop in soon. My bad for the delay.


Wrote this in the last 45 minutes. Not bad to be honest.


Silent For Most My Life...
Started Writing... & I Found The Words...
Now I’m Heard... Sending Shockwaves...
Round The Earth Like The Saudi Purge...

Sounds Absurd... To The Layman...
Not To Doubt The Workings Of Satan...
Faustian Curse Is The Payment...
If You’ve Made An Eternal Arrangement..

At The Earliest Stages...
Pretty Stupid To Begin With, See...
I Was Practicing Black Magic...
Like Druids Into Wizardry...

Keeping Honest With The God In Me...
I Seeked A Different Direction...
See Things... Not In The Majority...
Of People’s Visible Spectrum...

Used To It Of Course, Since 5 Years Old..
It’s Why I Can’t Stand...
The Lies We’re Told... & Mind Control...

Turn Your Back On Peer Pressure...
Every Rap Is Official...
That’s Word To Vladimir Lenin...
With The Hammer And Sickle...

Keep It Philosophical...
Despite The Path It’ll Lead Me...
We Are Not At All Alike...
Like Niqabs And Bikinis...

We Keep Our Cool... With All...
We’re Undeterred By The Drama...
Nazis Can Push Us... Till They End Up...
In The Earth Like Agartha!!!

Insist On Falling Prey To The Media...
News’ll Keep Em Asleep...
To Ignore The Game Is Easier...
To Those People It Seems...

Mind Blowing, Though...
They’d Rather Be Blind...
Cos The Human Ego Is Weak...
So We Force Their Eyes Open...
Like The LudeVico Technique...

Havent gone through the whole thread yet, but I like what I see.

You have a clear passion that comes through and a unique style.

I look forward to reading more.

a reply to: Grambler

Gracias, mi amigo...

Heads up...
Much of it will seem like very paranoid ramblings, but it’s truly just entertaining for me to write about crazy topics in rhyme form.


Much appreciate the kind words, pal.

originally posted by: Hazardous1408
a reply to: Grambler

Gracias, mi amigo...

Heads up...
Much of it will seem like very paranoid ramblings, but it’s truly just entertaining for me to write about crazy topics in rhyme form.


Much appreciate the kind words, pal.

I am dabbling in rap on the battle thread, but I am certainly an amateur.

But I use to do stand up comedy. I would try to make fun of issues that I cared about.

I found that I could better understand things from all perspectives, even those I didnt agree with, if it was presented in a form that I had a passion for.

Thats what I like about what you are doing here. Its got truth and your perspective coming through, but its in a style that makes it more accessible for different audiences.

Even if I dont agree with a point I interpret you making, it humanizes the disagreement and reminds me that all of it is coming from a real place.

Thank you very much, Grambler my friend.

Fully appreciate the kind words.
I’ve enjoyed what I’ve seen of your input so far in the battle thread...
Pretty damn good haha.




My latest work;

Taken Over... Never Fearing...
If The Dark See My Efforts...
They’ve Been Social Engineering...
Since The Nazi’s Agendas...

Disengage From Hurt...
See The Pain Inside My Observations...
This Is Sacred...Worshipped...
Since Ancient Times Like Constellations.

For Ascension To Our Pantheon...
You Gotta Last Till The Fight Ends...
Not Obsess With The Kardashians...
Or Follow Stars Like The Wise Men...

Ayo True Leaders... Show Uniqueness...
No You Creatures... Won’t Defeat Us...
Souls, Who Show You Open Wounds...
And Won’t Lose... So You Need Us...

Giving Rope To Cowards...
That The Darkest Minds Seeded...
This Is Close Encounters...
With An Afterlife Edict...

Kings And Popes Devoured...
It’s A Mastermind’s Thesis...
Bringing Hope... Without Us...
You’d Be RFID Chipped...

Refusing The Delusions... Of The Fools...
Who Think They’re Off The Grid...
Seclusion Institutions...
Harbour Wolves Within While Lost In Bliss...

Improvement Is A Nuisance...
To The Rulers... Of The Continents...
Recruitments... In The Movement...
Have The Jewels Of Wisdom Prophets Did!!!

a reply to: Hazardous1408

Hey Haz!

Somehow I missed this post, sorry about that.

Love your new writing, this passage:

Sounds Absurd... To The Layman...
Not To Doubt The Workings Of Satan...
Faustian Curse Is The Payment...
If You’ve Made An Eternal Arrangement..

& all that internal rhyme throughout.

Hope you're doing alright, have a good day, my friend

a reply to: zosimov

Hey, sis...✌️

You’ve no need to be sorry haha...
I’m the one who should apologise, I need to get fully into your battle thread ASAP...
I will do so this evening, for sure that’s a pinky promise.

I’m not too bad, and not too good... so so.
Succumbed to the temptation of alcohol tonight. Meh.
I’ve taken Kali’s passing pretty hard. Like many here I’m sure.




Have a few more rhymes to share here...
The reason there has been less activity in here is because I finally bought more cloud space for my phone, so I’m not as worried about losing the bars now.
Though I’ll still be doubling them on paper in case anything else goes awry.
Can never be too careful with such things.



Thank you so much, matey. 😬👍
Multisyllabic work and internal rhyming are my absolute favourite aspect of writing, even before concepts and similes/metaphors.

Very much consider my flow more important than what I say, if that makes sense. 😂


Here’s the latest from the last couple of days;
You’ll notice in the first few lines a little nod to something you suggested earlier in the thread.
Gracias for the inspiration.





Even True Believers...
Can Proceed With Crude Procedures...
Master Soviet Psych Weapons...
Like Nina Kulagina...

Like God I’m Iconic...
Attacks Won’t Work On The Stealth...
My Stock Will Skyrocket...
Like Saxe-Coburg Gothe Wealth...

Intelligence Agencies...
Flag Codewords... Watch Ya Self...
Experiments Daily... Believe...
And Covert Ops As Well...

Honorary Agents Are Heightened...
With Super Powers...
Solitary Vagrant Of Violence...
Like Rutger Hauer...

Surrounded By Dirty Coppers...
With Hidden Rats Amongst Us...
The Downtrodden Turn To Monsters...
With Vigilante Justice...

The Hounded Reverse The Problems...
Of Victims That Are Hunted...
No Bowing To Serpent Gods...
Like Egyptians And The Sun Disk...

Spells On Your Health...
Didn’t Spare The Sordid & The Deviants...
Welcome To Hell’s Kitchen...
Where Your Organs Are Ingredients...

I’m Revolting... This Is Foul...
Involved With The Rotten Souls...
Like The Bonesmen Sitting Round...
The Skull Of Geronimo...

They Overvalued The Gold...
& The Precious Chains On Their Neck...
But They Only Valued Their Souls...
When The Devil Came To Collect...

Fame Ain’t Respect...
It’s Comes From Sacrificing Content...
We Deprive The Feelings Of Avarice...
F# The Antichrist... We’re God Sent...

Fly Under The Radar...
If The Extremism’s Stealth...
Won’t Trade A Clean Bill Of Health...
For An Obscene Bit Of Wealth...

So F# Your Temporary Status...
Little Ten A Penny Maggots...
History’s Destined To Remember MCs...
That Are Legendary Rappers...

Through An Imbalance...
I Was Resurrected Mentally, Peasants...
And We Reduce Em To Ashes...
Like Directed Energy Weapons...

Penetrate In The Life Of The Beast...
Accentuate Our Desire For Peace...
Educate With A Fire Release...
Accelerating The Rise Of Disease...

This Ain’t A Right & A Left Thing...
So F# Your Side Of The Spectrum...
When It Comes To Signs From The Heavens...
We Want Your Undivided Attention...

Ya Peasants... In The Presence...
Of Royalty By Divine Right...
The Penalty Is Death...
If You Poison People With Limelight!!!





I have a few more but I’ll save them for now.

Thanks again, guys.
You’re outstanding people who I fully admire.

a reply to: Hazardous1408

Hazardous,

I really enjoyed reading your post about Kali (and her quote in your sig is just gold). She is the only member on here who has moved me to tears, I truly loved her and I hardly knew her.

I'm sure you could forgive yourself a few drinks. Start back up in the morning.

Also....



dope verses.

No apologies needed, and (really!) feel free to read without stepping in, not read, or drop some fire any time! Do what ya feel

The Bravehearts Made This...
To Assassinate Nazi Sadists...
We’ll Grenade Blast Racists...
Just Like Reinhard Heydrich...

It’s Simple Really...
I Drop Some Lyrics... That They Can’t Test...
The Underground’s A Place...
You Don’t Wanna Visit... Like The Dark Web...




Still a work in progress.

Muḥammad Al Wahhab...
Who Spawned The Wahhabi Salafists...
Said Innovation Was Apostasy...
But Innovation Was Part Of His Tactics...

Cosied Up To Muhammed Bin Saud...
Lured Arabia From The Path They Had...
Thus Extremism Was Born...
Call Me Crazy... But I Would Argue That..

Onto King Abdulaziz...
The First Saudi Monarch...
This Ain’t Where It All Began...
But Where You Work Out The Problem...

Given The British Order Of The Bath...
And U.S Legion Of Merit...
A Reform Not In Accordance With Islam..
For Future Seeds To Inherit...

It Was Under His Rulership...
They Struck An Abundance Of Oil...
Ever Since... The Terror’s Been...
Mainly Funded By Royals...

Al Nusra... ISIS...
The Taliban And Al Qaeda...
The Sauds Fund The Violence...
And Have A Plan As Power Players...




This is also unfinished at the moment...
However the concept is pretty solid.

Could be a little controversial when it drops. 😂😂😂

originally posted by: Hazardous1408
Could be a little controversial when it drops. 😂😂😂

Ya think?

It Was Under His Rulership...
They Struck An Abundance Of Oil...
Ever Since... The Terror’s Been...
Mainly Funded By Royals...

Al Nusra... ISIS...
The Taliban And Al Qaeda...
The Sauds Fund The Violence...
And Have A Plan As Power Players...




This is also unfinished at the moment...
However the concept is pretty solid.

Very solid concept, also delivery.

Remember when the Saudi prince was busted in Lebanon with all that captagon (drug used to numb troops so they'd commit more murder).

Very criminal elements, destroying an otherwise lovely culture. Same stuff the world over. Keep speaking the truth!!!

The World’s In Disarray...
They're Blaming Global Terrorism...
But Not Their Bombings Of Weddings...
Or When They're Droning Pregnant Women...

I Wish Upon A Star...
They're In The Kingdom Of Allah...
By The River Of Kauthar...
With Their Kindred & Ummah...

& Those Who Seek...
To Openly Convince You Of Their Piety...
Hopefully... Their Bode Will Be Abyss...
& It Is Fiery...

Bismillah, You See The Terror...
On Display...
Inshallah, They'll See The Error...
Of Their Ways...

Join The Cult...
And Feast With An Army Of Demons...
Until It’s All Adding Up...
Like The Fibonacci Sequence...

Don't Play With Me Honestly...
This Is Ancient Philosophy...
The Way It's Shaping Up Is Symbolic...
Like Sacred Geometry...

My Flow's Molten Lava...
I've Reached My Soul's Nirvana...
I Am Bodhisattva...
With My Open Chakras...

Intense Meditation...
Immense Dedication...
Without My Head Medication...
I'm Blessed... & I'm Patient...

My Hatred Solidified...
Antipathy Has Ossified...
My Sacred Lyrics...
Leave The Industry Lobotomised...

In Mind, Body & Soul...
With Cold Hearted Mysticism...
Tchaikovsky Of Flows...
The Mozart Of Lyricism...

Game Is Fulla Cocky Rappers...
Muppets If We Have It Right...
Invasion Of The Body Snatchers...
Puppets To A Parasite...

The Hardest Of Lyricists…
As Smart As A Physicist…
With The Heart Of A Martyr…
I Harbour The Limitless…

My Bars Are As Intricate…
As Horus’ Images…
That Are Carved In The Pyramids…
Fighting Darkness I Can’t Give Into This…

While Slave Labour…
Made My Nikes & Your iPod…
So I Stay Praying…
Will You Guide Me To The Light God...

Broke Times...
Controlled By The Lowlife Etonians...
Rappers Biting... Stealing Priceless Art...
Like The Smithsonian...

It's Lonely When You're At The Top...
It's Lonelier At The Bottom...
I've Seen The Heights & Hit The Depths...
Them Moments Are Best Forgotten...

Aiming For Heaven, Now...
No Hell In This Londoner's Plans...
Insane & Forever Wild...
You Can Tell I'm A Punisher Fan...

Compliments For Rapping's Greatest...
Drop A Scripture, Hack The Matrix...
Songs Of Praise, Bombs Away...
A Continent's Eradicated...

Rappers Scared Stiff...
We're Hunting Purple & Spare Pistols...
Dickheads Think They're Fly...
But We're The Surface To Air Missiles...

Playing Non Phixion...
To Make The Universe Aware...
Also Praying God Listens...
To Our Universal Prayers...

Foul Flows From Angry Choppers...
Wild Souls That Rap For Props...
& Make You Wanna Kill Dirty Cops...
Like Raoul Moat & Harry Roberts...

It’s The King Of The Hill...
Drinking Triple Distilled...
On A Mission To Kill The Competition...
That Wanna Sing To The Filth!!!


Gonna continue working on this one though, might make a few changes here and there.




Also a little Brexit verse;


Like The Rise Of The Proletariat...
I'm Usually Backing Socialism...
But Voting Leave, Put A Dent...
In Their Plans... For Globalism...

The Referendum Sent A Message...
To The Trilateral Commission...
Voting Leave Was The Only Way...
To Fight Back & Rule The System...

A Dynamic Jewel Of Wisdom...
Their Wish Is To Trick Our Nation...
Its The United States Of Europe...
It's Bigger Than Immigration...

Controlling Our Borders Ain’t Racist...
No Matter How Much You Say It Is...
We Chose Sovereignty Over Slavery...
And That's Just The Way It Is...

Admittedly Voting Out...
Has Given A Voice To The Racists...
& Its Fair To Say We Could Have Stayed In...
And Had A Choice In The Changes...

But I Chose Autonomy...
Yeah, F# The Heads Ignoring Facts...
But Also F# Autocracy...
& Unelected Bureaucrats...

It's Bigger Than Money...
Stop Worrying How Will The Pound Do...
Stop Blaming Older Generations...
Smart, Young People Voted Out Too...

That's All I'll Say On The Matter...
The NWO Can Take A Loss...
And Remember... Never Once Did I Say...
That They're Coming To Take Our Jobs!!!


I like this one a lot to be honest, had it in the catalogue for a while, came across it while scanning through older works.
Seemed like something I’d want archived on ATS.

Zos, you’re a diamond, and I’m gonna look deeper into that drug you mentioned to try to incorporate it into the track, thanks mate. 😬👍

I'm The Merciless Warlord...
Plagiarists Can Bite...
On This Circular Saw...
I'm Hotter Than The Earth's Inner Core...

The Bravehearts Made This...
To Assassinate Nazi Sadists...
We’ll Grenade Blast Racists...
Just Like Reinhard Heydrich...

They Can’t Claim This... Sort Of Ability...
Or War With Us Lyrically...
Slaves To The System...
Everything They Do...
Is All For The Industry

Nothing... But Prostitutes For Labels...
And Everyone Is Burned Out...
What’s The Use Of Fame Fools...
When You End Up Getting Turned Out...

It’s Simple Really, I Drop Some Lyrics...
That They Can’t Test...
Underground... It’s A Place...
They Don’t Wanna Visit...
Like The Dark Web...

It’s Hard To Trust... In The Gutters...
Ya Closest Friend’ll Do Man Dirty...
Don’t Take Much For A Gunner...
To Turn A Devil... Like Van Persie...





Needs a bit more work done, but not too much.

The Van Persie reference may be a little lost over the pond...

He was a soccer player for Arsenal (their nickname being The Gunners) who left them to join their fierce rivals Man Utd (their nickname being The Red Devils)...
Don’t think anything else in these bars is as obscure as that though, lol.

a reply to: Hazardous1408

I got the reference but I'm a fan of soccer,
You been spitting grease fires,
only hotter,
You would have us calling cease fires,
I see you spitting acid on that thread...

like police blotters ...





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Come join us in the battle thread bro!if you read it there's plenty of ammunition..we would love to have you!

Respectfully,
~ meathead