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My 2 Latest Verses... Still Undecided On An Instrumental. (HipHop)

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posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 08:07 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Well, Haz, for better or for worse, I made the thread.

I'm sorry- shoulda let you take it, I'm dreadfully aware that not everyone can rap lol but hey it is all in good fun I guess.

I hope you're having a great night. (I enjoyed all those new verses you threw out there.)

This line just hit hard. All it takes is one lie, you are right.




Look, NASA Doesn’t Always Lie...
And I’d Never Claim They Do...
But We Only Need One To Know...
The Motives They Present...
Just Ain’t The Truth...

If Nothing Has Been Found...
There’d Be No Need To Be Misleading...
That’s All We Need To Understand...
And Seeing Is Believing...

edit on 12-1-2018 by zosimov because: (no reason given)




posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 09:43 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Kids got fire,

there is a lot of quality in this thread. I hope he keeps adding to it, it's like storing your work to the cloud.. anywhere you go you can now pull up ats and look at your work, that is an awesome resource for a mobile depository.



Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 10:07 PM
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Thanks guys, you’re amazing.

It’s very likely I will continue in this thread, as I always use my Notes App on my phone to write, but for about 7 months now I am unable to back it up due to storage or data shortage etc...
I have way too many (hundreds) important verses to risk a random crash and losing them all.

So for now, ATS and FB are my notepads for new material, as well as taking time to transfer older verses to a safer location.


The support here has been fantastic, much love people!

edit on 12-1-2018 by Hazardous1408 because: Spelling!



posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 10:36 PM
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This Is The Pinnacle, Top Of The Range Tech...
It’s Not A Faulty Data Instrument...
It’s Why There’s Still No Legit Conclusion...
Explaining The Vela Incident...

The Investigation Concluded...
No Radiation Detected...
But Hey... Who Really Knows...
The Way Some Nation’s Protected...

It’s Not Wise To Expose Or Piss Off...
A Rogue Nuclear State...
Cos Any Potential MAD Exchange?...
There’s No Doomier Fate...

So Nothings Said Or Done...
To Those Who Won’t Sign The Treaty Pact...
But It’s Not Worth The Risk It Poses...
So I Suppose I’d Agree With That...



posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 10:40 PM
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We Know The Government’s Corrupt...
It’s The Main Profession Of So Many Liars...
But I’ve Been Hearing A Lot Suspect Things...
Of Laser Weapons And The Cali Fires...



posted on Jan, 15 2018 @ 09:18 PM
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Zos, sorry my friend, I’ve had your battle thread in my tabs since you posted it, and I promise I will definitely pop in soon. My bad for the delay.


Wrote this in the last 45 minutes. Not bad to be honest.


Silent For Most My Life...
Started Writing... & I Found The Words...
Now I’m Heard... Sending Shockwaves...
Round The Earth Like The Saudi Purge...

Sounds Absurd... To The Layman...
Not To Doubt The Workings Of Satan...
Faustian Curse Is The Payment...
If You’ve Made An Eternal Arrangement..

At The Earliest Stages...
Pretty Stupid To Begin With, See...
I Was Practicing Black Magic...
Like Druids Into Wizardry...

Keeping Honest With The God In Me...
I Seeked A Different Direction...
See Things... Not In The Majority...
Of People’s Visible Spectrum...

Used To It Of Course, Since 5 Years Old..
It’s Why I Can’t Stand...
The Lies We’re Told... & Mind Control...

Turn Your Back On Peer Pressure...
Every Rap Is Official...
That’s Word To Vladimir Lenin...
With The Hammer And Sickle...

Keep It Philosophical...
Despite The Path It’ll Lead Me...
We Are Not At All Alike...
Like Niqabs And Bikinis...

We Keep Our Cool... With All...
We’re Undeterred By The Drama...
Nazis Can Push Us... Till They End Up...
In The Earth Like Agartha!!!



posted on Jan, 15 2018 @ 11:28 PM
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Insist On Falling Prey To The Media...
News’ll Keep Em Asleep...
To Ignore The Game Is Easier...
To Those People It Seems...

Mind Blowing, Though...
They’d Rather Be Blind...
Cos The Human Ego Is Weak...
So We Force Their Eyes Open...
Like The LudeVico Technique...



posted on Jan, 15 2018 @ 11:54 PM
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Havent gone through the whole thread yet, but I like what I see.

You have a clear passion that comes through and a unique style.

I look forward to reading more.



posted on Jan, 16 2018 @ 12:03 AM
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a reply to: Grambler

Gracias, mi amigo...

Heads up...
Much of it will seem like very paranoid ramblings, but it’s truly just entertaining for me to write about crazy topics in rhyme form.


Much appreciate the kind words, pal.



posted on Jan, 16 2018 @ 12:20 AM
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originally posted by: Hazardous1408
a reply to: Grambler

Gracias, mi amigo...

Heads up...
Much of it will seem like very paranoid ramblings, but it’s truly just entertaining for me to write about crazy topics in rhyme form.


Much appreciate the kind words, pal.


I am dabbling in rap on the battle thread, but I am certainly an amateur.

But I use to do stand up comedy. I would try to make fun of issues that I cared about.

I found that I could better understand things from all perspectives, even those I didnt agree with, if it was presented in a form that I had a passion for.

Thats what I like about what you are doing here. Its got truth and your perspective coming through, but its in a style that makes it more accessible for different audiences.

Even if I dont agree with a point I interpret you making, it humanizes the disagreement and reminds me that all of it is coming from a real place.




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