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My 2 Latest Verses... Still Undecided On An Instrumental. (HipHop)

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posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 04:23 PM
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Wrote a little 16 bar verse today...
Just messing around, passing the time, and shooting off ideas...




You Must Be Making A Death Wish...
Facing This Red Mist...
I’m Raising A Clenched Fist...
You’re A Failure... Like Brexit...

I’m The Light Source...
The Nazis Hidden Experiments...
Will Have Us Fighting Cyborgs...
& Artificial Intelligence...

Agenda 21...
They’ll Have Us Broken Up In Districts...
Living In A Future...
That Is Post Apocalyptic...

They’ll Do Anything...
For Global Domination...
Total Occupation...
Even Genocidal Measures...
To Deal With Over-Population...

You Live Ya Life...
Like A YouTube Troll...
So # Who You Know...
I Got Ya Voodoo Doll...

My Flow Is Poison...
Like Some Oil Slick Damages...
That Can’t Be Translated...
Like The Voynich Manuscript...

Lawyers And Bankers...
That Fill The Positions Of Power...
Manipulate To Their Advantage...
So Now... The Mission Is Our’s...

Only One Option At Hand...
To Reverse This Ideology...
Spilling Blood Of The Tyrants...
Or Be Murdered By Their Policies!!!



Nothing too special, just keeping the skills sharpened, and continuing to fight the 4 month drought.

Peace!
edit on Thu Jan 11 2018 by DontTreadOnMe because: edit per OP request




posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 09:54 PM
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Went on a dramatically “inspired” writing spree and absolutely flooded my Facebook timeline today, to the annoyance of my friends...

Literally, non-stop, since I woke up until now...
They weren’t specific lyrics, or connected conceptually...
I just wrote whatever came to me.

So I’ll paste them all below for a little reading pleasure... or criticism if the reader so decides.


It’s Crazy... When You Just Observe...
You Find That Humans Think...
They Know It All...
Stepping Back You See That Most Of Em...
Are Lunatics... & Total Fools...

Now... I Can’t Deny Our Best Advances...
Are Really Amazing...
But We Failed By Handing Power To Psychos...
And Watching Demons Debating...

Society Has Potential...
Even If Some Are Ignorant...
To Most The Facts...
But What’s The Point...
When The Control...
Has Just Been Gifted To The Sociopaths...

They’re Chopping Down Our Forests...
I Can’t Bare Mentioning Our Oceans...
And Almost Fully Unopposed...
The Fact We Let Em, Is Revolting...

Compare The Ancients... To The Present...
God!... It’s Testing My Patience...
Common Sense?..
It Must Have Died With Lost Civilisations...

I’m Kinda Disheartened, Really...
Cos Our Choices Have Surely Declined...
What Type Of Retarded Species...
Would Poison Their Water Supply...

Destroyed The Planet Already...
A Byproduct Of Gaia’s Human Race Disease...
And It’s Continued To The Outer Limits...
They’re Filling It With Space Debris...

Most Places With Homo-Sapiens...
It’s Like Pollution Is A Guarantee...
Tear Apart The Eco-System...
Repeat The Process...
Moving Through The Galaxy...

Irony Of “God Given Land”...
Primarily Ruled By Atheist Tyrants...
Check Out The IDF Whistle Blowers...
Known As Breaking The Silence...

This Isn’t Jews Versus Muslims...
Or Arabs Against Israelis...
It’s Zionists vs Humans...
That Haven’t Accepted Hades...

They Say We Wanna Kill The Jews...
But Most Our Prophets Are Hebrew...
Zionist Hasbara Spreading...
And A Lot Of It’s See Through...

Hundreds Of Millions Will Tune In...
For The Royal Wedding...
What Would The Tax-Dodging Reptiles Do...
Without Adoration, From The Loyal Peasants...

Divine Right?... Ha...
#ing Give Me A Break...
And They’ll Be Worshipped & Defended...
By A Dip S*** Hipster, Who Thinks He’s Awake...

Explain These Things To People...
And They Just Kinda Look Startled...
NASA & The CIA...
Created By The Schutzstaffel...

Nazis Were The Ones...
That Perfected Rocket Science...
There Only Decent Contribution...
Still Implemented For A Tyrant...

The Only Good They Did...
Was Still Influenced By Evil...
And Now Our Leaders Follow Goebbels...
Building Ignorance In People...

Better Watch Ya Back...
If You Wanna Scan The Darkness...
Have A Proper Gander...
At The Propaganda Masters...

In Recent Years... It’s More Apparent...
The Ruling Class Live Lives That’s Sordid...
They Used To Keep That Covered Up...
Like Astronauts That Died In Orbit...

Minds Are Tortured...
Like The Cosmonauts...
They Sent To The Sun...
A Blatant Suicide Mission...
That Was Directed By Scum...

Most Of The Time...
God & Family’s My Topic...
But Am I Losing My Grip...
Now I’m Off The Anti-Psychotics...

Steady Wondering... If This Leads...
To Something Darker...
Even So... I’m Still Screaming...
“# Big Pharma”...

The Drunken Master...
While Rappers Stunting Like Jackie Chan...
Only Fear My Creator...
I Never Worry ‘Bout Any Man...

Protecting My Aura...
With A Forcefield From Darkness...
Using Ya Useless Voodoo...
But You Mortals Are Harmless...

He’s Godly... What A Fella...
Couldn’t Stop Me With Bombs Of Terror...
Controlling Resources...
Just Like John D Rockefeller...

It’s The Sordid That Propel...
When They Stockpile...
By Hoarding All The Wealth...
Like The Rothschilds...

I’d Never Trade My Status Of Unsigned, For Fame...
Murder Rate Is Down, But Mostly Gun Crime’s The Same...
Establishment Are Stuck... Thinking Trump’s Quite Deranged...
What The # Do You Expect From The Bloodline Of Cain...

My Stock Will Skyrocket...
Like Saxe-Coburg Gothe Wealth...
Intelligence Agencies...
Flag Codewords... Watch Ya Self...

My Loud Mouth Prob’ly Makes Me...
Prime Candidate For Silencing...
I Really Couldn’t Give A #...
I Stand Straight... On A Defiant Ting!!!





So, a productive day, eh?
More so than usual actually, in my case.
edit on Thu Jan 11 2018 by DontTreadOnMe because: edit per OP request



posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 10:00 PM
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First things first , never sweat and never show your thirst,
Never bet and never show your worth,
But Keep that girl who keeps an iron in her purse,
uniform, brown pants red shirt,
you think it's bad it can always get worse,
Encompass never immerse,
don't be afraid to embellish your verse,
Its not over till you roll in the hearse,

Ziiiiiiiiiiiiip~

Meat that trash is wack 1980s rap,
Your losing them, now bring them back,

"Okay okay have it your way,
Back to the previously scheduled witty word play."


Bring that beat back!
Watch me attack..


When I go national geoGRAPHIC on your ass kid,
That means the whole world is gonna see you get your ass kicked,
I'm not hungry,im famished,
That means I do work ,and your family vanish,
Let's be candid,
Before I go off on a tangent,
Respect is commanded,
It's the first commandment,
Check your bandwidth,
While you were busy cos-playing Harley Quinn at Comic-Con,
I was cross-training at the gym just to pin you in the octagon,
I'm phat like octomom,
Rollem' out like bakugan,
terrorize and tendarize the rhyme,
I Memorized the necronomicon...


While passing balls to fat soccer moms..






Respectfully,
~ meathead
edit on 10-1-2018 by Mike Stivic because: fixed the Brown pant bar, it was bothering me...



posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 10:05 PM
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a reply to: Mike Stivic

Brilliant, mate.


While you were busy cos-playing Harley Quinn at Comic-Con,
I was cross-training at the gym just to pin you in the octagon...


This part was fire!!!




posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 10:11 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Those two bars have been sitting in my note book along time.
Sometimes I spit it and try to take it to a different place, the cadence pushes me forward.


Thanks twice, once for inspiring me to be creative and twice for the compliment my friend.



Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 10:40 PM
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You’re Impossible To Save...
If You Believe What Our Leaders Say...
Have Fiercer Battles Underground...
Than Those Between The Greys And Green Berets...

You Numb Nuts... I’m Kicking Up Dust...
Like The Lunar Module...
Commercial Rappers Spit, Assume They’re Full Of Sh*t...
Like The Judas Gospel...




Damn, I need to just stop and go to sleep!



posted on Jan, 10 2018 @ 10:59 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Nah it's good stuff bro,

Maybe you should stay up late more often



I like how you mix in the esoteric , I have a bunch of stuff like that in my notebooks



Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 07:36 PM
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Yep... It happened again.

I spent a vast part of the day just relaxing as I planned...
And once again, out of nowhere, I was flooding my timeline again.

The difference being the very noticeable nihilistic fashion that dominated my words.

I’ll share them anyways.



What Ya Gonna Do...
When The Gods Surround Your Spirit...
Show You Things... That’ve Not Been Bound By Physics...
Beyond The Outer Limits...

People Would Rather Ignore It...
Dreaming Of Starships In Orbit...
Beings Of Carnage... Support It...
While Evil Incarnate’s Awarded...

Guess What?... You Should Get An Icey Chill...
When I Tell You Despots Have Chinese Children...
Slaving Away In Sweat Shops...
Disguised As Nike Buildings...

No Wonder... So Many...
Have Succumbed To Their Insanity...
Powerless... & Ridiculed...
In This Uncomfortable Reality...

They’ll Look Down On The Destitute...
Treat Em Like They’re Scum Or Addicts...
And Then They Actually Have The Nerve...
To Wish For Life On Other Planets...

Here’s A Heads Up... Those Life Forms...
Know We’re A Poisonous Error...
With A Selfish War-First Mentality...
They’ll Avoid Us Forever...

People Think NASA’s Special...
The “Apex” Of Science & Discussion...
But Most Are Unaware...
They Can’t Even Get To Space...
Without Relying On The Russians...

The Retards Actually Believe...
They’re Gonna Get “Us” To Mars...
It’s Just A Ploy...
The Hubris Is So Amusing...
As If They’d Let Us Surpass...
Our Cut Off Point...

Let Us Go To Mars... Ha...
They Know What Men Would Want To Do To Them...
The War-First Mentality I Mentioned...
They Won’t Even Let Us On The Moon Again...

If NASA Cast A “Bombshell”...
It’s A Lie... I Ain’t F***ing Joking...
They Had Their Chance With Roswell...
But Decided To Cut Em Open...

The Watchers Don’t Take Kindly...
To Mistreatment Of Ambassadors...
And The F***ers Stole Their Tech As Well...
Which Leads Us To The Challenger...

“F*ck Off Back To Earth”...
& Take The Lunar Dust You’re Gathering...
Warned From Further Lunar Missions...
So Who The F*** You “Challenging”...

There’s That Human Hubris Again...
Rearing It’s Ugly Head...
Won’t Accept A Lesser Status...
And Think We’ve Been F***ing Blessed...

The Delusions Are So Immense...
Absolutely Epidemic On Terra...
Think They’re Centre Of The Universe...
But Truly Just A Genetical Error...

A Pleasure To Knock Em Off...
The Pedestal Their Ego’s Built...
“You’ll Never Be One Of Us”...
“The Heavens Won’t Appease Your Filth”...

“Oh, You’re No Longer Challenging...
Instead It’s Curiosity”...
“So Predictable”...
“Who The F*** You Think Your Fooling, Honestly?”...

Now The Gov Agencies Know...
They No Longer Receive Our Trust...
So, Instead... They Build Ya Hopes...
By Pushing Elon Musk...

I Still Believe, But Keep My Doubts...
Like The Likes Of Stanton Friedman...
But They Know There’s No Difference...
Cos Private Plans Still Bite The Hand’s That Feed Em...

Probe Photos Blurred...
And Intel Documents Redacted...
F*ck... How Much Proof You Need...
To See They Show You What They Want...
And That’s It...

Like, What Could Possibly Be On The Moon...
That Needs To Be Blurred...
And Motherf***ers Still Just Trust Em...
It’s So Deeply Absurd...

In Your Heart Of Hearts...
You Know It’s Real... You See The Facts I Voice...
But The Programming Is So Powerful...
I Bet You Still Believe I’m Paranoid...

They Still Rely On Part Of The Masses...
To Not Completely Focus Clearly...
But They’re So Brazen Nowadays...
Even Pushing Obviously Bogus Theories...

You Know The Funny Thing...
I Don’t Even Give A F*** About These Secret Operations...
Or Even Igniting A Knowledge Dump...
With These Frequent Observations...

There’s No Altruistic Intentions In This...
To Fight The Systems Rancid Crimes...
I Pick These Topics Cos I Refuse...
To Write Within The Paradigm...

I Ain’t Stirring Up Insurgency...
To Save Us All From Tragedy...
Cos I’ve No Interest In Helping...
This Virus Race We Call Humanity...

We Shouldn’t Even Want To Help...
Just Crash Their World Around Em, Frighten Em...
You Think Your “Woke” & They’re Asleep...
Well Let Me Tell You ‘Bout “Enlightenment”...

You Waste Your Time When Your “Red Pilling”...
& Trusting Man To “Get It”...
Cos They’re Already Fully Aware Of The Horrors...
But They’re Just F***ing Apathetic!!!






Hmmm... well depressing, filled with hopelessness, and laced with cynicism...
I can’t always be cheery. 😂😂😂
edit on 1.11.2018 by Kandinsky because: Edited the f-bombs as per request



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 08:09 PM
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They Often Display Their Sordid Nature...
When They Deny Our Sky Neighbours..
The Lost Or Misplaced Recorded Data...
Always In Times Of High Strangeness...

Just Happens To Disappear...
So Many Times, Conveniently...
Don’t Matter It’s Crystal Clear...
Still Man Deny What’s Easy To See...




I really would like to stop now, but I shouldn’t take this sudden influx for granted either.
If I don’t embrace it, I’ll definitely regret it if I go another 4 months without an idea. 😂



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 08:48 PM
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Much Beneficial Knowledge Of Space...
Is Long Delayed Before Inclusion...
Add That To Ways They Cause Confusion...
With Their Blatant False Conclusions...

And I Can’t Claim I Brought Solutions...
But I Won’t Debate The Pure Delusions...
Of Those That Say It’s All Illusion...
And Their Aims For All The Humans...

It’s Solely For Those With Power...
And The Purpose Is?... God Knows...
But There’ll Never Be A Time...
The Common Man Traverses The Cosmos..

Some May Deny Them Cutting Off...
Transmission Feeds Is Telling...
But Can’t Wonder Why It Doesn’t Stop...
Conspiracies From Spreading...



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 09:03 PM
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originally posted by: Hazardous1408
I really would like to stop now, but I shouldn’t take this sudden influx for granted either.
If I don’t embrace it, I’ll definitely regret it if I go another 4 months without an idea. 😂


You have some some strong bars in there.

Really, I am not just blowing smoke up your arse,
I love making things rhyme that shouldn't ...

Also negativity can be more enlightening than positivity, just look at George Carlin or lenny bruce..

Now considering those references I understand the irony in what I'm about to say next..



I hate to make a suggestion, but I'd like to make a suggestion..

If you need the f word for the extra beat (sometimes we need extra syllables to sustain a cadence)or to add intensity, if it's not integral to the rhyme, just change it to "Damn" or "hell". It won't change the tempo and you won't be breaking t and c's , so your rhymes don't get deleted...

Just looking out bro


Respectfully,
~meathead
edit on 11-1-2018 by Mike Stivic because: Layna ate my report card



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 09:25 PM
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Their Favourite Go-To, Default Response...
Transient Lunar Phenomena...
And I’ll Admit... That Many Times...
It’s Actually True... But I’m Not A Mug...

If It’s All As Innocent As Claimed...
Why The Need For Sporadic Lies...
So The Reasons People Doubt Em...
Is Entirely On Their Backs, Alright?...

Look, NASA Doesn’t Always Lie...
And I’d Never Claim They Do...
But We Only Need One To Know...
The Motives They Present...
Just Ain’t The Truth...

If Nothing Has Been Found...
There’d Be No Need To Be Misleading...
That’s All We Need To Understand...
And Seeing Is Believing...




If there is anything today’s flash flood highlights, it’s that I seem to be the biggest NASA hater in the World. 😂😂😂
I promise, I’m not. 😂😂😂
I don’t even fully believe these disparagements...
But it’s fun to express many different perspectives when writing.


NASA, carry on...
Don’t take me too seriously.



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 09:40 PM
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a reply to: Mike Stivic

You’re a great guy, mate...
Your encouraging words are so vastly appreciated.


As to the F word, more often than not, I choose confidently to refuse to swear (curse), and in the rare case that I do, it is to express the urgency of my point, but more often it is to emphasise the power of the emotion I felt in regards to Bar it appears in.


In day to day convo, I have the foulest mouth imaginable...
But I’m well aware it dilutes content in lyrical form, and is also highly unattractive and off putting to listeners.

So, despite the extremely profanity laced ones from today (lol), it is definitely not an important facet of my writing generally.



TL;DR only used for specific reason, and as little as possible.


Thank you again, mate...
You had no obligation to keep returning to this thread, so my appreciation for your kindness and interest is too immense to put in words.




posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 09:53 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

You talented, I return because I enjoy the thread and your material.
I curse like a shipwrecked sailor who just found his last keg of rum empty in real life.
I'm not a moral oral..

I have had rhymes deleted here , I just don't want to see it happen to you.



Respectfully,
~meathead



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 10:11 PM
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a reply to: Mike Stivic

Thanks for the heads up, fella.

Too late to edit myself, I’ll alert the post and hopefully a mod will do me a favour and replace the words with hashtags.




posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 10:12 PM
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Humans Wait For Extraterrestrial Life...
To Save Em... Or Reveal To Them...
The Aversion To Logic And Tribal Nature...
Won’t Appeal To Them...

I’d Never Expect Disclosure...
From Ultra-Advanced Intelligence...
Like We Don’t Communicate With Insects...
Or Rodents In Our Experiments...

With Zero Benefit To Offer...
Philosophical... Or Scientifically...
It Won’t Improve There Lives...
And We’re Possibly Even A Liability...

On Earth It’s Not Unknown To Shun...
The Poison That Sew Mistrust...
So With The Incurable War Culture...
We’ll Be Avoided By Those Above...





That might be the last one. 😂😂😂



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 10:48 PM
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Some Take The Easy Way To Cope...
In A Safe Bubble That’s Comfier...
They Don’t Want To Assume The Worse...
On The Fate Of Space Shuttle Columbia...

An Overactive Imagination...
And Fanciful Science Fiction...
Or Close Examined Declassification...
From Radical Minds Of Wisdom...

Truly... I’m Not Here To Convince People...
Cos I’d Rather They Decide...
There’s Beauty Pondering Possibilities...
In The Vastness Space Provides...

The Only Thing I Ask Of Others...
Just Don’t Let Them Close Your Mind...
Or Do... Cos Whatever...
My Only Intent’s To Flow And Rhyme...



posted on Jan, 11 2018 @ 11:05 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

As long as you keep spitting fire I'm going to keep bumping this thread.





Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 12:35 AM
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originally posted by: MisterSpock
I think it would sound nice over a solo acoustic guitar, maybe some harmonica thrown in there in the background.


what, no tambourine?

seriously tho, nice stuff OP




posted on Jan, 12 2018 @ 07:10 PM
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a reply to: fiverx313

Thank you kindly, fiver.





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