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My 2 Latest Verses... Still Undecided On An Instrumental. (HipHop)

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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 02:49 PM
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Howdy partner...
Thought I’d share my latest two verses I’ve written.

I hadn’t written anything since early October, and honestly going 3-4 months without writing something is pretty much unreal in regards to my usual routine.
However I found that spark again this week and have written about 7 new verses in that time, so hopefully the drought is over.

I don’t really consider myself a rapper, though I solely use HipHop instrumentals I prefer to think of my rhymes as poetry...
I try to stay away from the stereotypical topics the layman may consider Rap music.

My writing style is multi-syllabic, meaning I try to end each line rhyming multiple syllables rather than just 1 or 2...
It’s not unique at all, but is far more entrenched in Underground HipHop as opposed to the simplistic candy rap you will find in the mainstream.

Feel free to pick it apart and critique, even harshly if you must, I am used to it and actually enjoy it.
It’s no fun hearing great things all the time, because you become complacent very quickly.

You may find my content to be rubbish, you may not...
Either way I’d appreciate any input from ATS’s HipHop heads, and even those who just enjoy reading things that rhyme.

Just a quick heads up, these 2 verses don’t really have a specific central concept...
It’s just a mishmash of opinions, some topical references, and the occasional ironic narcissism. 😂

Also understand that I’m not always speaking from my perspective, the voices do influence some of the content in the sense that I try to add what could be considered the opinions of “the enemy”, battling my demons so to speak.

I think I’ve waffled on long enough now, so I’ll post the verses.

Peace!





Verse 1;

Media Manipulation...
It’s Their Dog Sh*t Agenda...
But It Came Back To Haunt Em...
Like The Toxic Avenger...

Chelsea Manning Told Us...
Of The Terror From Apaches...
Magic Never Can Attack Me...
Just Like Helena Blavatsky...

Aversion To The Foul...
& The Serpents On The Prowl...
So We’re Urged To Disembowel...
Any Worshipping The Owls...

Ordo Ab Chao... To Convince You...
They Produce A Crisis...
Contaminate The System...
Just Like A Computer Virus...

I’m One In A Billion...
At Best... Your One Within Thousands...
BAMN... Yeah I’m Summoning Malcolm...

Like Muhammed Bin Salman...
Purging Saudis And The Old System...
Faustian... Evolving...
From The Crowleyan Occultism...

My Soul Is Centre Stage...
As We Go Through End Of Days...
Our Foes Protect The Ways...
Of F*cking Josef Mengele...

We’re Sorcerers Of Lingo...
The Warriors Of Shinto...
The Fortunes Of A Schizo...
It’s As Torturous As Gitmo!!!


Verse 2;

Civilisation... Full Of Killers Like Jason...
While Monetary Control...
Is Dictated By Centralisation...

The Federal Reserve...
Not Federal... With No Reserves...
Immeasurable... The Worth...
Of God’s Generals That Roam The Earth...

The Jealous Turn Green...
Cos We Kill Sh*t... Like MS13...
Gotta Death Wish, Like Seth Rich...
Their Weapons Spurn Dreams...

Our Leaders Take The Piss Ya See...
Believe In Graven Imagery...
Depraved They Muddied The Waters...
With The Pizzagate Conspiracy...

Tryna Ridicule The Fact...
That They’re Child Abusers...
In Hopes Of Turning Your Attention...
From Defiled Accusers...

They Cover Up For Paedophiles...
Protecting Them From Punishment...
Cast Doubt Upon A Patriot...
For Questioning The Government...

Overstand Why It’s A Lot...
Know The Plans Tyrants Have Got...
Most Them Man Blind To The Plot...
That Sociopaths Rise To The Top...

Look Down On The Population...
Blame Rapping & Gun Violence...
Never Mention The Crown Jewels...
That Are African Blood Diamonds!!!




If you made it this far, thanks sincerely for reading...
I hope you found it somewhat entertaining.


Now back to my notepad, with the occasional glimpse at the New Topics section.

Love ya, ATS!




posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 02:52 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408


A powerful message, I bet this would be some fire over a Statik Selektah, Harry Fraud, Alchemist, 9th Wonder or DJ Premier beat!

Saluted!!!




posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 02:57 PM
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a reply to: FamCore

Much love to you, FamCore my friend. 👍

I will have a look through their catalogues...
I’ve pretty much overkilled it with Premo beats in the past lol.

He’s just too damn good.


Thanks again.
Peace, mate.



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 03:04 PM
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I think it would sound nice over a solo acoustic guitar, maybe some harmonica thrown in there in the background.



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 03:12 PM
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Haz,
A pleasure to read, your verses are so good!!!



Dead on about the ruling class, even muddying the waters with preposterous bs in order to mask the horrific Sh# they're really into.

You need a beat that hits hard, all I gotta say. I'll be back if I find anything to suggest.

Ha, this Necro beat is dope!


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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 03:22 PM
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a reply to: FamCore

Static Selektah!!! I love that work he did with Saigon!


So many great producers out there-- listening to Blue Sky Black Death now, another great to consider
anyway have fun making music Haz!!!
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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 04:11 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Well done!

I really like these bars :


The Federal Reserve...
Not Federal... With No Reserves...
Immeasurable... The Worth...
Of God’s Generals That Roam The Earth...





Respectfully,
~meathead
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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 05:40 PM
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One breath;

Home alone,wetting these bandits,
With Stallone tactics and Looney toon antics,
Jurassic, fossils line the creek,
Pterodactyl's spiraled from tail to beak,
Fractals, stylized chain mail on the weak,
Paxil, to turn dominant males meek,
Take a peek, transformations,
Like theon to reek, information,
Stagnant,
Cold like Freon leaks,
This tangent,
Aerodynamic, and sleek,
Rosey cheeks, wide eyed ,
Drinking the kool aid Laced cyanide,
I can't deny My minds fried,
No more tears to cry,
No need to keep the lie inside,
You get lobotomized ,
As i optimize, and upgrade,
Anxiety got me paranoid and up late,
Refreshing pages looking for an up date....
*Gasp!*

Man i really need to quit smoking....




Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 05:45 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

Hey, Zos.

I had you in mind when making this thread as you seem to be ATS’s most prominent HipHop poster, which I love by the way.
Before you joined it was an almost non-existent topic of discussion.

Thank you kindly for the supportive words too.

Necro instrumentals are a great shout, to be honest.
I have a few saved in my playlist, which I haven’t listened to for a while.
Maybe time to refresh my memory.

a reply to: Mike Stivic

Thank you very much, Meathead.

I only aim to please. Hopefully I succeeded.



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 05:57 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

as soon as I read your op my mind started working, I hope you don't mind my previous post, it was inspired by this thread .





And thanks for calling me meathead, when people refer to me as Mike, it feels weird..my real name is Joe..


Respectfully,
~ meathead
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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 06:25 PM
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a reply to: Mike Stivic


as soon as I read your op my mind started working, I hope you don't mind my previous post, it was inspired by this thread .


Glad I could inspire, it means I’m doing something right.

I do not mind at all, I actually liked it a lot.


If this thread takes off as a base for others to put their verses forward, it’ll be a better direction than the forgotten history that many threads suffer.
Although I fully expect the latter haha.


And thanks for calling me meathead, when people refer to me as Mike, it feels weird..my real name is Joe..


Not a problem, my friend...
Something in the back of my mind said “call him Meathead, he doesn’t like Mike”... some distant memory I’m sure of you clarifying that to others...
I’m glad it wasn’t a false memory for once, because that happens to me a lot. Haha.


Peace, bro!



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 06:37 PM
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I liked this song for a few reasons. Lyrically its meh, but the idea is great. I want to see more rap with acoustic guitar overlays. I like a spanish guitar twanging away but not so "Carlos Santana" the way everyone ends up doing it.


Maybe something like this but a little faster.




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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 06:39 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

I have been nagging zozzy to make a battle thread for so long it become a joke between us.

But a standing depository for random rhymes is something missing from the boards. There is a daily haiku thread, but people need writers status to post in it, so it sadly died..

We had a 13 page 5 year old battle thread, but a few New accounts with no flare for metaphors and a penchant for vulgarity got it shut down.. which is sad to me , I had several verses in there that I didn't save anywhere else..

I am not a thread maker , one look at my posting history is proof enough of that. But I think an original ats'er rhyme thread would be fun.


Respectfully,
~meathead



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 07:00 PM
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a reply to: tadaman

Necro is notoriously hit and miss, lyrically...
Far more consistent with his production.
So it is no surprise to hear you say meh. Lol.


Dog is asleep at the moment, 12:50am here, so I’m gonna check them at a time less likely to cause a disturbance.
Thanks, tada.




a reply to: Mike Stivic

I give you my word, pal...
If zos doesn’t get round to it first, I will make a battle thread for us all.
It’s a great idea, and has every chance to be very fun filled.

Currently, I already have my next potential thread in mind...
Once I’ve fully worked that one out, or discarded the idea, I will commence with the battle thread.

That is a true shame what you say about the past thread being shut down.
Sadly, I’m not surprised people couldn’t play nice.


In regards to a new version, I will probably need you guy’s help on an eye catching title.
I could clickbait the hell out of it, but that seems a bit out of order to the membership, especially if we want it to be a long term thread.

We shall get to that at a later date.


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posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 07:09 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Hear that zozz!


Now that's what I call lighting a fire under your arse..




Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 07:16 PM
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a reply to: Mike Stivic


Now that's what I call lighting a fire under your arse.


This is the perfect thread title!

😂😂😂



posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 09:09 PM
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This thread is such gold, by far the best of the day.

Hazardous, meathead,

You both just really seem like quality people to the core, and thank you both for your encouragement and support here.

It will almost hurt to crush you in battle but it's a cold world I guess...

😂😂😂

I am totally kidding. The main reason I have hesitated making that thread is that I have no experience or talent in rap. I did write a rap about Trump early on in the race before it really got vitriolic.. that was fun.. but then things weren't fun anymore so I didn't even record it as planned (I was planning a video and everything ha ha). I'm sure I could pull off a few funny lines, and I will try, but to defer to someone who actually has talent... well I don't mind that at all.

And the title- hilarious. It's perfect.

Hope everyone is having a great night.




posted on Jan, 8 2018 @ 10:12 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

And there she goes... downplaying her squills....

Zozzy's wit is biting..her verbal judo is solid...
This is her way of disarming the masses..

Don't believe it..

Proceed at your own risk hazzy!

Respectfully,
~ meathead



posted on Jan, 9 2018 @ 01:29 PM
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a reply to: Hazardous1408

Just went down the Helena Blavatsky rabbit hole.. never heard of her before and am kind of intrigued. She's an interesting historical figure indeed!

Related side topic: I heard recently of Nina Kulagina and she's another fascinating woman of history.

weekinweird.com...

Thanks for sharing deep lyrics, nice to learn something in such an enjoyable way!



posted on Jan, 9 2018 @ 04:04 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

That pleases me a lot, zos.

One of my main aims when writing is to throw in a few obscure references forcing (encouraging may be a better word) the listener to look things up.


Related side topic: I heard recently of Nina Kulagina and she's another fascinating woman of history.


Gonna look her up now, mate.



Thanks for sharing deep lyrics, nice to learn something in such an enjoyable way!


Really appreciate the kind words...
If there is anything in particular you’d like to hear in rhyme form lay a few topics or names down and I’ll happily work with them and put them in this thread for scrutiny.

I’m about to U2U you too, so keep an eye out for the white envelope at the top.




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