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posted on Oct, 15 2017 @ 08:08 AM
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Hey ATS.

Some of you friends maybe will remember me. I think ATS is a great source of feedback.

I decided to share a new piece to see if you like it. It finishes right at the chorus but the whole sound will give you an opinion. Any contribution is appreciated =)

To give some info; i record, play and compose myself at home.

db - old ways

edit: oh to add; i havent recorded the bass yet. will be done with the chorus and the whole song.
edit on 15-10-2017 by belkide because: (no reason given)


edit2: the lyrics

i still remember the old days
cant you remember all the shame
i still remember old ways
and i cant find another way

when you missed it
we all shared it
dont you fight gotta find another way
tell you something grows in you
you cant get away
edit on 15-10-2017 by belkide because: (no reason given)




posted on Oct, 15 2017 @ 09:21 AM
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a reply to: belkide

It really sounds promising. Go ahead adding the bass and little bit more of complexity after the first 4 lines of lyrics and the last 4 lines too.




posted on Oct, 15 2017 @ 09:37 AM
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a reply to: belkide

Nice, keep developing that. You've got something going there.



posted on Oct, 15 2017 @ 10:20 AM
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a reply to: belkide

Wow.

Very nice.
Why did we only get 39 seconds? I admit I usually don't want more music, as I am an elitist snob jerk. But I liked what I heard.



posted on Oct, 15 2017 @ 11:03 AM
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Great so far...

I'm interested in hearing the chordal movement into the bridge and how it resolves in the final verses.




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