What do you think of my new music?

This is a new track after some months. Its in english but not mixed and mastered so it can be heard a little muddy but that will go.

I hope you guys will like it. I am sharingi it exclusive to ATS as this is a private link =)

db - The Things You Do

edit: its not the full version btw as it never existed I write and produce while I record. I will finish the rest soon.

a reply to: belkide

Dude that was epic!!

I really enjoyed it, I opened that link thinking "ohhh no not another one"

That was good, give me 40 seconds of enjoyment.

thanks,

a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin

Thank you very much I am so happy to receive a comment like this =)

a reply to: OtherSideOfTheCoin


Pretty cool, reminded me a bit of the Gin Blossoms. Like a 90s vibe.

a reply to: belkide

Well it stomps my music into the ground- and that's a compliment to my music.

Have you ever tried deflemask? it's used to make old school 8 bit video game soundtracks or you can create some unique sounds, that with the hydrogen drum machine and a guitar and you've got yourself a hit.

a reply to: belkide

That was amazing. You have talent.

a reply to: Thecakeisalie

I will give them a try definitely =) Thank you.

a reply to: JonHutto

Thank you =)

a reply to: Thecakeisalie

Btw really appreciate your honest comment. After a bit thinking this piece without vocals came to my mind. I used to use more electronic tones in my music:

db - Illuzion

a reply to: belkide

I can't rate deflemask highly enough, it has attack, sustain, delay...it's like a super Nintendo making love to a synthesizer. but of course you need audacity, defle and hydrogen to get a threesome.

a reply to: belkide

very nice dude, it sounds great and the song itself is real good.

u just learn to play?

a reply to: belkide

WOW! Loved this!!!!!! Once it is better recorded and the song finished it will be amazing!!!!!!!

Do you have a youtube channel?

Your singing is good your cords still need work
if you look at the music in the link you provided listen Close to the lows and one dobble high .
I dont usually do music but your close very close .
Music is art and it takes someone who has that kind of skill to get it perfect .
You ovesly have the skill ( nice being born with it isnt it?
Anyway having it is just the start perfecting it is the goal .
Your good enough for the ( bars ? that host music now .

The last part with the vocals was kind of "ehh." Still, pretty good.

a reply to: belkide

Overall nice composition, belki. Maybe you can polish the vocals a bit and slow the riff transitions after 0:25. There is potential in it. With a bit of touch it might turn very good song

a reply to: pacificwaters

Nope

a reply to: Argentbenign

Thank you. Yes this is a song I just left for rest. Maybe some days maybe a year after I hopefully will solve the problems which you mentioned as I am aware. Sometimes its better to leave it and start a new song and listen to the old one when you have time. They change a lot and maybe you re-record with a different color, soul, and maybe you just get the riff and make a whole new song you know. =)

a reply to: DarkestConspiracyMoon

+1. It gives me eh as well hahahah =) thats where I stopped composing.

a reply to: belkide

Don't you dare stop composing! Finish the song! Oh you have a couple of private messages. I know for many of us, the envelope isn't turning white to alert us of a message so I'm mentioning it here.